There's always someone who has feelings for someone else, and ponies are no exception. Applejack has unconfessed feelings for her pal Rainbow Dash, which is a predicament in itself. However when Rainbow Dash mysteriously disappears, Applejack sets out to find her. Although what Applejack doesn't know, is that sinister forces are at work here...
Well that was a good start! I like how AJ was portrayed to be already in love with dash and then her dream of them being together was smashed because of dash's mysterious girlfriend. I'm not trying to say I don't like AJ and dash being together, but I think it was a good idea not to start out with AJ just fighting to tell rainbow dash her feelings. good job and I can't wait to see what happens. :)
i squeed like a little filly the first time i read it and i did the same again just there
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It's nice to see it can have the same effect the second time round!
I Love It
Beastly I'm looking forward to more of your works
great story
:squee:
at like chapter 1 i was all like
the at ch2
ch 3
ch4
Try Mario & Luigi Bowser's inside Story Boss Music for AJ vs Volo.
AWESOME
*sniffle* PURE GENIUS!
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I'll give it a look, always nice to see some good fight music.
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And thank you, glad you enjoyed it.
D'aww so cute...
awwww Apple Jack **opens arms out wide** Brony hug?
oooooooooooo... the plot thickens
Great story! Really enjoyed it.
wait? what happened to the colt?