• Published 16th Mar 2012
  • 2,370 Views, 8 Comments

Diamantaire - Lucefudu

After her concert, Sweetie Belle thinks she is worthless. It's up to Rarity to help the young mare.

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Author's Notes

Inspired by:

David Bowie - Rock 'n Roll Suicide

Time takes a cigarette, puts it in your mouth
You pull on your finger, then another finger, then your cigarette
The wall-to-wall is calling, it lingers then you forget
Ohhh oh oh oh you're a rock 'n roll suicide

You're too old to lose it, too young to choose it
And the clock waits so patiently on your song
You walk past a café, but you don't eat when you've lived too long
Oh, no, no, no, you're a rock ‘n roll suicide

Chev brakes are snarling as you stumble across the road
But the day breaks instead so you hurry home
Don't let the sun blast your shadow
Don't let the milk float ride your mind
You're so natural... religiously unkind

Oh no, love! You're not alone!!
You're watching yourself, but you're too unfair
You got your head all tangled up, but if I could only make you care
Oh no, love! You're not alone
No matter what or who you've been
No matter when or where you've seen
All the knives seem to lacerate your brain
I've had my share; I'll help you with the pain
You're not alone!

Just turn on with me and you're not alone
Let's turn on with me and you're not alone (Wonderful)
Let's turn on and be not alone (Wonderful)
Gimme your hands... 'cause you're wonderful! (Wonderful)
Gimme your hands! 'Cause you're wonderful! (Wonderful)
Oh gimme your hands!

Well... Sweetie Belle was shown in the show as an awesome singer so... yeah; I'll stick with that.

Revising this was easier than I expected... but the dialog between Sweetie Belle and Rarity still turned out to be quite a pain in the ass.

Comments ( 5 )

Well done!


Loved this story it had me tearing up at the end. I see Sweetie Belle becoming well, and a wonderfully famous singer after this story. :raritywink:

That was a good read :) I like Sweetie Belle & Rarity stories, and in my opinion, you showed them good in a more matured state. Have a fav

This reminds me so much of my older sister, but it's cool we're all biffls now!:pinkiehappy:

A very fine story with a great ending. Thanks for writing this (even if it was written a long time ago).

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