After marrying a stallion of her dreams,Snowdrop bears an earth pony filly.An earth pony filly with a magical gift. But the filly must learn to control it's powers,if not the whole of Equestria will be doomed . This is the story of Winter Snow and the tale of her life.
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Hmm, interesting. I will be watching this with great interest.
Beautiful. I love this story...
Lake Silencio and the cremation of Sweet Tea are both references to Doctor Who... Which you used flawlessly! Well done!
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He he,thanks for the wonderful feedback!It means a lot to me!
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Not a problem, keep up the good writing!
OK, four things:
1) This was a very interesting chapter, mostly cause you're milking the evil Snowdrop hiding in the Dream-scape idea to the last drop; I thought that part of the story had been resolved.
2) Your grammar is all over the place. Example below:
You absolutely need to put space between a word and a comma/full stop/exlaimation point/etc. It should look like this:
3) Are you gonna have a character that's similar to Anna's character (don't try denying that this is loosely based off of Frozen; there's too many concepts that come from it)
4) Is this story's timeline gonna extend into the Mane 6's era?
Is this based on the snow girl by OliviaLovesSnow on wattpad?
4071903 hmm,ok then. I will edit it . Yes,I was kinda inspired by Frozen's concept. No worries,I'll try to resolve this issue of grammer. This is ,after all, Winter Snow's story of her life and pony spoof of Frozen.. Not sure if it will clash,but I think I'll try my best to turn it around from Snowdrop. No worries,I'll give it another round of edit stuff and see how it works.or may be change a few roles. Thanks for giving feedback!
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Um no,this is a pony spoof of Frozen,but a little bit more sadder by my own design. Not sure what exactly is the snow girl though. Care to explain? That is,if you don't mind.
I caught the DW reference! Allons-y is the the 10th Doctor's catchphrase!
I understand what you're saying. My friends and family are just as, shall we say, discouraging about the brony fandom.
Yes black and white my favorite *cough* sarcasm *cough*
Doctor Who references?
Oh the burning corpse on the boat
Oh,Winter Snow,you could be so,much more if you were taught under me.So,much more." Sombra eyed Winter
Thought of this when I read that..
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=IJzoDujhlvM
"Repeat after me,Winter.Let it go."Luna said slowly to allow Winter to repeat her words.
"Let it go."Winter echoed before feeling chills traveling up and down her spine,making her glow in a faint,sky blue light fleetingly and fading as quickly as it had appeared.
This song is fitting for that line.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=moSFlvxnbgk
For the first time in forever,Winter felt carefree and happy as she trotted down to her first class of the year.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=eMZ_A1IP1yg