Doodle Bug and Hoop have been best-friends ever since they were little foals, and like every year, they're celebrating Hearth's Warming Eve, lets hope something doesn't go wrong!
We all know something's going to go wrong, I mean, it's Hearth's Warming Eve, and the two most clumsy, and awkward ponies in Equestria are celebrating with a tree and everything.. I have a feeling that we'll need lots of bandages...Celestia help us...
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So, I have no idea where this story shall go...Just a story of me and my best-friend since I was a kids' pony-sonas, having Christmas together...We always break something...But, it's most definitely going to be funny.
Teen rating for the fact that I said, 'How high are you right now Doodle?' Because just in case..
This was cute. I enjoyed it.
3613761 Yay!
See? I knew you could write a good story!
3633639 Well...I mean, it's not that good...images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120326171253/mlp/images/thumb/3/37/Fluttershy_blushing_smile_S2E22.png/640px-Fluttershy_blushing_smile_S2E22.png
3634106 You're just starting out. I just know you'll grow more confident with your stories as you produce more
.
Don't get discouraged either if a story of yours receives a few thumbs down without a rational explanation from the people who did it. Their just trolls who don't show respect for new writers, or they just do it because it doesn't meet their standards which is really immature
.
Take that Seraph guy for instance. On two of my clop fic stories Shy Summer Nights and Pond of Wonders. He always makes stupid comments or questions as if he doesn't acknowledge the Human tag. It's like he doesn't appreciate the presence of humanity in the MLP universe. You can tell if you search the comment feed for both of these stories. Somehow I just know he was one of the people who thumbs-downed those two stories
.
Looks like both of our main OC's are Pegasi. The picture of my own OC is in my blog. Spoiler: I'm a blank flank
. The name of my OC is Blooming Shine.
I wish you luck in your future stories
. This story was so cute
and funny
which is why it's earning positive reviews and feedback so far.
Apparently my Hearth's Warming tale is full of feels
, but its reviews are positive
. It's called "A Parentless Hearth's Warming". You can tell it's sad just by the title. The cover photo is even more depressing
.
3635793 You always write these long inspirational comments and stuff ._.
And yea, I tried reading "A Parentless Hearth's Warming" but kinda stopped and went, 'Nope, nope nope nope, lovely story there but nope,I get enough feels from Doctor Who."
3635953 Sorry
. In real life I don't talk this much
.
3636021 It's fine, just makes me feel all simple and stuff
Yea, I don't either, too awkward...