Doodle Bug was always such a normal mare. Well, a bit strange, but still, normal by some standards. She was adorable, clumsy, sweet, and painstakingly awkward. Everyone loved Doodle Bug. Well they did after she apologized for whatever she had done to make them mad at her. But, Ponyvilles' daily destroyer isn't all she seems to be. What no pony seems to know is that Doodle Bug had a very rough fillyhood, and it had stayed with her. And now, after a little accident, Doodle Bug does something that shocks everyone. And what she does in the next few weeks shocks them even more...
Edit 2016: guys this thing is so old and badly written why do you like it so much ahh. you guys are all reading it and here i am, unable to even look at the damn cover without wanting to scream. you guys are the true MVPs here, tbh.
Edit in the year of our Lord, 2023:
Republishing this after getting it restored to my account for archive purposes, and so my beautiful friends can laugh at me. Yes, I'm making them get in fimfiction.net to do so. I want them to have the authentic experience.
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Sorry, couldn't resist.
Oh my GOD THAT WAS AWESOME MORE
3843945 As you wish
dat DAmuro blood
anyways, I like the story
3844256 Yayyyy! And yea, dA muro was all I had and the drippy thing was perfect, so meh :33
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I just use DAmuro so much that when I suspect an image of being DAmuro, every time it is.
3844267 I can do that too x3 You good sir/madam, are fabulous, and I like you.
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I can make you a DAmuro picture right now, I bet I could get it done
3844274 If you want to
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*waves hands*
Look at your DA page, a commment by Silverkirby36 will MAGICALLY apperar
I love stories that focus on the mind of the character which is becoming more common it seems. This story is great and centers around the main character telling the story which really helps you realize her feelings and her mind.
Oh what will happen? Gonna have to wait to find out. Oh this is an exciting story.
Cheezus Christ...
I might follow this...
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I love your blood effect it was awesome
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Wow. Doodle Bug said earth ponies were useless in this chapter. That almost made me laugh till I kept reading. Love this story.
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3853920 This story gives much the same feeling as most the good horror movies do. Makes enjoyable to read when you get that feeling something is just waiting to strike at you while reading it. Between this and 2 other stories I'm reading I'm going from feeling slightly nervous
to laughing 
to crying 
. Luckily I'm almost finished with reading the sad one that I love so that lives this beautiful creepy tale which I will wait patiently for more of and the funny one which will take a while to finish. 
Not pinkie if i was in equestria i would murder doodle bug and that dude is right we psychopaths do think alike
Oh wow. I feel Fluttershy really is just being her usual kind self but to be fair she rarely actually gets violent. Still getting violent in order to help the main character of the story seems right.
.............. this story is stupid by sheer factor of your oc being glorified over the actual chracters..............
twilight has foguht fallen gods and chaos demons and survived an army of bug fiends. what chance dose a stupid insane pohny have?
not to mention pinkie pie would sense her coming..........................
this story is stupid. it neeeds to make character who found changelings and dirscord incompetent to function.
Are you really referencing cupcakes and i think rarity's next
3872125 go read something else and get a life while your at it dont you have something better to do than post hate comments on a well written story
3872182 its not a well written story. events go too fast to begin with. not to mention this character is somehow murdering beings that battled supernatural monsters and beat them.
in other words it supposes that this oc is better than the likes of discord and chrysalis.
Rarity
3872125 Yea, I knew some negative comments were bound to happen, anywhom, I respect your opinion and will try to improve my writing skills, this is the first dark story I've ever written ^.^
3872164 Yea, I'm referencing Cupcakes
3872653 a dark story does not need characters to die believe it not. especially not the mane six; especially miss manhandle a fucking elephant sied bear for fun.
it is the threat and tone that creates a dark story, not peple dying.
3844274 man we like the same type of fanfics dont we and im serious i didnt delete your comment and if i did it was an accident
3872655 how mane stream can ya get
3872734 Very
3872705 Okay, like I said, first attempt at a dark story, calm down.
3872230 Discord would absolutely DESTROY Doodle Bug, you can't beat the god of Chaos. You just can't.
3873632 well she killed two of the beings who defeated him, so she must be.
see the problem. one could argue they are taken off guard and such. but pinkie pie can't be taken off guard, and tiwlight is so powerful that she could probably wrench a knife out of anyome's hoof with a thought.
3873779 Pinkie Pie had just watched the Cakes be murdered, I think she was a little busy trying to not, ya know, have a mental breakdown, but I get where you're coming from, and I'm sorry my story didn't meet your standards, but I'm proud of it, and I respect your opinions on it. I will try to do better next time.
I personally love this story still. After all it's way better then the Cupcakes story. Anyone has a problem with me saying that that's your problem.....oh who am I kidding acting like I wouldn't fight any hater I see. I'd kill the haters. Luckily I can tell the difference from hate and appropriate info. Saying this story is stupid....
I'll turn you into pastries for such hateful comments that don't help approve things. Seriously. My story needed more info so my next story will have alot of info and detail. This story gets called stupid....that does not help the writer approve at all! 
3874104 I seriously had to sit there for a second when I got the negative comment and just go, 'I should totally end this right here with an epic burn.' But then I got thinking and just went, 'No, I should be mature about this. Kill 'em with kindness!' And then I started thinking about all the epic burns I could have used .-.
3874155 Yeah well I kinda get violent when I see haters. I used to try to ignore them or hope being nice is enough but now....I figure if you actually scare the person....well it works like when Arnold acted crazy right in front of the bully in "Hey Arnold!". They can wind up too afraid to attack again if they think you're crazy. It helps that I actually am crazy though.
No wonder Pinkies my 2nd favorite pony. I can understand her. 
3874203 Pinkie is my 2nd favorite 2 x3 Luna, Derpy, and Rainbow tie for first .-.
3874212 For me Fluttershy is first Pinkie 2nd Twi 3rd Dashie 4th Derpy 5th Luna 6th. With how many ponies there are Luna has a good ranking. The only ponies I hate are Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon.
Rarity
how about stop than continue........... seriously rarity can manipualte an entire shop full of items, and she couldn't smash her attacker with a mannquin or something? or tie her up with a bunch of................
nevermind if they actually had anything resembling their actual competence ponkie pie would have killed her already.
Geez more hate on this story. Stop hating this story. *Takes out knife.* I'm warning all those thinking of sending hate to stop cause I have a knife and I'm willing to kill haters.
This story is good if you can't enjoy it you're the problem for choosing to read it!!!!! 
YOU CAN NOT KILL FLUTTERS, SHE WILL NEVER DIE IN THIS STORY, YOU KEEPTED HER ALIVE AND NOW SHE WILL STAY THAT WAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kill AJ first so Rainbow will be super mad.
If you kill flutters............I WILL FIND YOU.......
Aj cuz rainbow is 20% cooler
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OKAY OKAY, NO KILLING FLUTTERS!
I keeps beeing better and better....
Moar "Le Psychopathe"......
Doodle bug took fluttershy off the list