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Three years after an Earth Pony uprising, Equestria has been totally changed with Earth Ponies being the dominant race, and other ponies having to live their lives in hiding. As a cruel system captures and destroys innocent ponies, Twilight Sparkle will find herself thrown into an adventure to save what is left of the country, traveling around and witnessing first hoof the changes not only around Equestria, but in her friends as well.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 17 )

Very interesting storyline, I do look forward to reading more! Fluttershy better not be dead though >:(

This seems like an interesting story...a few minor errors, but nothing too big to really be bother by. Poor Twilight, to hear that the kindest pony was killed has to be heartbreaking. Here hoping that her 'death' is fake... Good luck with this story, I'll be favoriting it to see more.

Short C&C:
...Apploosa...
> Correction: ‘Appleloosa’. Google it if you feel uncertain on anything.

Owwwh, the new chapter is just out and even now I can't wait to read the next one. Awesome writing :twilightsmile::heart:

Well, at least its back now? :twilightsmile: Better post a new Chapter instead, can't wait to read more!

This story is great man, keep it going!

Aside from the spelling and grammar errors, I'm really liking this. I can't wait to see more!

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Yeah, I'm using spell check to cover my own ineptitude, so I have no idea what's write and what's wrong. :P

Dark pony majicks to bring Flutter back to life.
:flutterrage::fluttershbad::fluttercry:

The amputated wings bother me more than they should. It'd be nice if they could be regrown, it'd probably be a big morale booster for the resistance.

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If you're here for a story that's nice, then you're in the wrong neighborhood.:pinkiehappy: :twilightangry2: :duck: :fluttershysad: :ajbemused: :rainbowdetermined2:

IT is probably really bad that for a second I was really thinking that the next chapter was going to start with Twilight waking up with Pinkie in bed with her. Probably worth a good laugh.

This fic looks like it has a long road ahead of it.
I am going to take a guess and assume that Rainbow and Twilight are going to get into a serious argument in the future.
Really like seeing the update and look forward to more

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