• Member Since 19th Nov, 2013
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EvilFluttershy


Not a hard core, write every day writer, but i do write, and recently, a lot

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Fluttershy loses her peace of mind and over takes the meaning of assertiveness, killings off her friends one by one, in very brutal ways.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 14 )

Wow fluttershy is so bad ....I like it

I personally think the ending would've been better if it HAD been a dream. You know, for the HAHAHAHAHA-SLAP-TO-THE-FACE kind of feel. Either way, I liked this. very entertaining. Oh, and the Cupcakes references!!!! :pinkiecrazy:YEEEAAAAAAAAAAH

Comment posted by EvilFluttershy deleted Nov 20th, 2013

Dont know what to say, but good story

Ive seen this story done so many times... But this one is pretty well written. Ill leave it unrated :P

hmm...at a couple parts i was like :rainbowhuh: then at others :facehoof: and at others :pinkiecrazy: so yeah...i'll leave it unrated...and reference to cupcakes, but rainbow dash is alive?! cupcakeception...

For y'all, this story is based BEFORE cupcakes, but there are references of it. This story does imply that cupcakes never happened, hence why rainbow dash is still alive.. :trixieshiftleft:

My only critique is that she should have taken her sweet time and enjoyed each one. Also more rape. With a knife if you insist, but definitely more rape.

3524067 waht is wrong with you sir

rape don't solve nothing :facehoof:

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Yes it does, it solves my need for masturbation material.

3521053 Wait... so is it BEFORE, or is it AFTER and it just didn't happen? You're literally saying both at the same time.

4316523 ........ Your a piece of work, you know that? :facehoof:

4316941 It is before, hence why RD is still alive

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