I picked up on Starswirl, but I can't figure out the last one.

Just when I thought rainbow was gone, and I was crying my eyes out, she comes back. Wow... Just wow...

Also, if you do more fics with cum inflation, I will follow you..

Yeah im practically crying now. Just read your last three chapters, beautiful i say, with the miraculous revival of Rainbow Dash. Id say this is the most touching story ive read so far

And i also very much enjoyed the cum inflation scenes :}

that conclusion actually made me tear up. any chance of a sequel?

3578090 Read The Pack. Still going strong.

3578196 Mayhaps. There is another story i had planned but its sort of unfolding in The Pack so i ptobably wont do it. A sequel is definately a possibility.

3578085 You'll know who the 'Black' cloaked figure if you really look. What is a reacurring line and the last line in 'Beep'

3578267 I don't see how you could sequels this, given the epilogue. A breakaway with each of the mane 6 maybe, but the best way to continue this would involve removing the epilogue from this one and ending the 'series' with it.

3578289 Your right i know. I like how this turned out and am not changing anything. There may not be a sequel but i do plan on writing many more stories!

Also for those who couldnt guess who the man with the hat is, notice all the words used to discribe his cloak are words like whirl, twist, billow. They are all synonyms for another word.

3578306 Yeah...my follow bribe was a bit of a fail though, because I've been following you for some time now.

3578332 Did you see what i did with Dusk Shimmer?

After starting this a day or two ago I was unsure of what to think. I had put the story down to deal with my college studies and work on a few things but then I realized I had not finished it. I re-read the entire thing and have come to the consensus that sometimes I need to wait until I'm further into a book before I judge it. I love it through and through. You played out the story very well and you have a decent gift with being able to pull at the readers heartstrings. The fun fetish bits were a nice interlude for sure however I must say that the main story is what kept me drawn in. I will say that there are a number of grammatical and punctuation errors but nothing so bad as to make me stop reading. Very good job on this and I can't wait until I have the time to read even more from you.

DAT last quote

I know who one of the people are and that's one person is star swirl the bearded

By the way best first story I ever read you should make more

3578363 The daughter? no. What?

3579829 I mean her name, it's a synonym for another name.

3579499 Im glad you liked it!

3579492 Read the last line in Beep.

Out of all of the stories I have read on this site this one was the one that made me cry. Good job and keep it up.

3579890 Ah. Sunset.

Knowing that This chapter came from a human's Mind is what gives me hope that this planet won't turn into a pile of radioactive rubble.

3580770 Not quite lol. Another name for Dusk is Twilight. Could you guess what Shimmer is?

3581681 I get it, don't worry.
...
Or perhaps you should?
But then again, if you DO worry, I probably won't do anything.
The question is what WOULD I do if I do decide to do something?
...
I'll get back to you on that.

3582651 Mind....blown. Commence the mustache

3582735 Why thank you. It was inspired by both the Luteces and Pinkie

THE BESTEST. STORY. EVER. I YOU MAN (No, not as a couple)

3579492 its star swirl the bearded and death

Yeah te guy told me>>3585562

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3578997 I want to tell you how good this comment made me feel. It makes me happy to see my story is appreciated and how much I appreciate the fans. I've learned a lot in the past few weeks. I hope you stick with me for future stories. You have a very merry Christmas!

Hmm, so that's the Epilogue...

Well, better start this story off by reading the first chapter.

3607483 Have you ever been sky diving? If not, have you ever had your ears pop?

3607639 A little fun. Friends with Benefits :)

Sitting in class reading thinking
Must.....not....cry.......in class.
Good story loved it through an through.

3648482 Thanks!

words escape me on how to tell you how great you did with this story it really touched me

It's certainly not the best clopfic ever. It's got a lot of annoying bullshit in it, and I feel you used Deus ex Machina farrrrr too much. However the clop was well written and arousing, and some of the slice of life bits were enjoyable. It's about 20% cooler than the average clopfic. Anyways 6.8 out of 10

3744034 Thanks!

3744034 Also you should check out my other story I just finished. I'm planning on doing one for each of the main 6 and think it's a bit better than this one. "Beauty and the Beast."

Oh and this one was my first story, so I learned a lot from it and people that made suggestions.

3757222 Thank you!

3763819 Thank you... *takes a step back*

3768202 Yes. Took a few months but finaly someone got the reference!

3768792 What? Talking bipedal anthropological ponies that can fly or use magic? Of course!

3768872 DAMN YOU CHARACTER IMMORTALITY!! WHY CAN'T YOU DIE AND STAY DEAD!!!

3769039 Sorry