I thought it was just my imagination, but it happened again... Beep........ Beep.....Beep...Beep.. My heart started to race. I turned around to face the bed. I darted to the bed, my eyes wider than dinner plates. I stared down at her. Her eyes opened...
In complete defiance of logic, moral conviction and the fact that's it's physically impossible. But this story makes POTIONS that can ressurect people without any established rules at all.
And that i'm sure we can all agree represent's teaches a truly valuable life lesson... pfff WHAT?!
Now you know, you know for a magical contrivence to just come along and hit some sort of cosmic reset button, without consicvens, is most friquently refured in contemporary writing as a *Deus Ex Machina= God Out Of The Machin, hayling back to the ancient greek state, where the gods themselfs were characters, but which today refers to a celestial get out of jail free card, and i widely considerd the smalliest sort of lazy writing, and so please take note that whenever a character is suppose to die in this story, it's never ever actuarlly explained how the survive! It's just enoughfor you to simply say that it does, with kind of make me a bit confused?
Ah, in our univers life and death are pretty streit farward, but in a curtin story life seems to sit atop it's mount olumpus and raining diode decreases upon everyone who dear to oppose it and enforcing it'self by the god of death himself! *sigh* I need a brake...
You put this out just as i finished the last one, I love your work in this please continue
3577969 You should stay for the Epilogue. I'm almost done with it.
:,) beautiful
When rainbow dash came back alive I screamed out yes ! Then my sister came In and said why the hell are you shouting
If you didn't put this chapter in as soon as you published the last one I would have killed you. You dodged a bullet on this one. You dodged a bullet.
3579449 Mine too. And again.... Yes!!!!!!!!
In complete defiance of logic, moral conviction and the fact that's it's physically impossible. But this story makes POTIONS that can ressurect people without any established rules at all.
And that i'm sure we can all agree represent's teaches a truly valuable life lesson... pfff WHAT?!
Now you know, you know for a magical contrivence to just come along and hit some sort of cosmic reset button, without consicvens, is most friquently refured in contemporary writing as a *Deus Ex Machina= God Out Of The Machin, hayling back to the ancient greek state, where the gods themselfs were characters, but which today refers to a celestial get out of jail free card, and i widely considerd the smalliest sort of lazy writing, and so please take note that whenever a character is suppose to die in this story, it's never ever actuarlly explained how the survive! It's just enoughfor you to simply say that it does, with kind of make me a bit confused?
Ah, in our univers life and death are pretty streit farward, but in a curtin story life seems to sit atop it's mount olumpus and raining diode decreases upon everyone who dear to oppose it and enforcing it'self by the god of death himself! *sigh* I need a brake...