Rainbow Dash falls in love with a new colt in town. But she has no idea what she is TRULY in for.
Wow. Just in the letter it's getting funny! Keep the humor! Plz!
Homie Capitalize the "I" at the end of the letter
wtg got me into the story in the first chapter normally its the 3rd or 4th before I know
I like how you use the letter as a way to be able to get away with mistakes, haha, it's genius
Um... Your Majesty.Just get on with it!!!!
It is a good start, just do your best and everypony here in the fandom will like your works.
Wow. Just in the letter it's getting funny! Keep the humor! Plz!
Homie Capitalize the "I" at the end of the letter
wtg got me into the story in the first chapter normally its the 3rd or 4th before I know
I like how you use the letter as a way to be able to get away with mistakes, haha, it's genius
Um... Your Majesty.
Just get on with it!!!!
It is a good start, just do your best and everypony here in the fandom will like your works.