Sorry i havnt posted yesterday or today, but the chapter im working on will make up for it. 3,000 words strong and im only half done with it. Also i hope you like muffins!
Holy shit that was a quick and jarring jump. It usually takes a while for the characters to reach the point of saying "let's date!" We're told that they have crushes on each other, and we see that he saves her life, but for it to so quickly jump straight up to that point is jarring in these types of stories. This sort of thing generally only happens in a story where they then proceed to immediately have sex. Which is actually less jarring than this.
Need sex tips? Ask Pinkie!
Dawww
Dinner or sex the hardest thing ever to decide!
3466126 It's not that hard to decide. First sex, then dinner. (or both at the same time.)
3466126 I know! It's the worst.
This is a pretty good story ill definately keep reading
3466196comment of the year right here
Sorry i havnt posted yesterday or today, but the chapter im working on will make up for it. 3,000 words strong and im only half done with it. Also i hope you like muffins!
3466196 don't you know anything? Dinner before "dessert!"
I never thought that rainbow was smooth enough to get a boyfriend...I'll see where this goes
"Maybe Sex can wait..."
NO! DO IT NOW!
Imma pervert, get me
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Exactly my thought.
3475467 Pointers on sex from pinkie LOL I crie evRtim.
3475467 Mmmmm...
MUFFINS!!!
Whoa! This is interesting, but moving really fast.
Holy shit that was a quick and jarring jump. It usually takes a while for the characters to reach the point of saying "let's date!" We're told that they have crushes on each other, and we see that he saves her life, but for it to so quickly jump straight up to that point is jarring in these types of stories. This sort of thing generally only happens in a story where they then proceed to immediately have sex. Which is actually less jarring than this.