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Rhythm Pulse is the new pony in Ponyville. He likes hay fries, videogames, but most importantly, WUBS.
He just wanted a quiet place to enjoy his music, but when he meets Twilight Sparkle and her friends, he figures he's going to get just the opposite. Oh, he's also a blank flank.
Yes. There's a romance tag. He likes dubstep. You can figure this one out on your own.
A tie-in with my upcoming series, the Wolfsbane Amadeus series. It's an HiE, you have been warned.
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Don't worry, things will get more interesting in chapters to come
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Yup, I'm going to need the whole 12 gauges for this one.
Still, in something of relative use, the conversational tone and repeated incursions through the fourth wall really ruin the immersion. Sure, it's an alright technique if you're trying to get a few, cheap laughs for capitalising random words and acting as if the main character is having an angry rant about their situation, but it gets pretty irritating after the first few paragraphs.
Oh, and your OC's name is spelt wrong in the cover art. Just saiyan'.
And you spelled sayin' wrong! Ha!
I only kid my dearest sir/madam/dalek, I appreciate your feedback and thank you kindly
As for the cover art, I suck at art. I had my friend draw what I thought I would look like as a pony many months before I even had the idea of doing this story. I told her the name, and she spelled it wrong. In pen. And put it on facebook.
And, since you're my first commentor ever, I shall watch you from the shadows. (runs behind stoic black hedgehog)
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Thankssomuch! This is my second story. (The first one sucked, I got one chapter finished and deleted it)
I'm really happy someone likes it so far.
So is Pinkie.
Fell the rhythm feel the rhyme come on people it's bobsled time!!!!
I see what you did there.