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The joy of student exchange comes to Ponyville elementary in the form of the rambunctious Bat Pony Narcissus Floret. The CMC are going to enjoy a vacation from Diamond Tiara. Narcissus has a history of destruction and combined with catastrophic force that is the CMC, Ponyville is going to Tartarus. Narcissus has many lonely nights ahead of her. Who will she find to help her cope with the long night.

My entry for Equestria Daily's October Bat Pony Write Off. This was going to be my entry but now it's getting to be too long. Oh, well. Its got a life of its own now. I can't bare to cut it short just because of a couple entry rules. May the night last forever.

Continued in Lesser Light: Timed Trials in Infinite Space http://www.fimfiction.net/story/142183/lesser-light-timed-trials-in-infinite-space
A Meisterverse Story.

Chapters (19)
Comments ( 20 )

Need a friend?
Why not Changelings?

There are many grammer mistakes but the story is getting pretty interesting:raritywink:. I am going to wait for the next chapter. :twilightsmile:

3397219 That's a great idea. lol :trollestia:

3397408
Changelings are always a good idea,
Especially when there are emotionally confused young fillies,
Just ripe for the emotion harvesting cocoons.

3397428 u have a point there

Oh crap! 326RD you said the worse possible thing, lol. I made some grammar mistakes. Now I'm going to be freaking out whilst trying to find said mistakes. Could you give me a hint please?:twilightsmile:

Is this story about a bat pony or a changeling?

Comment posted by soothsayer deleted Oct 26th, 2013

This story is about a bat pony exchange student. If anyone knows anypony who could draw/paint a cover photo for this fic please let me know. I'm a horrible writer and an equally bad artist, lol.

How do all of you like the story so far?

3407056
I like the story,
But then again i like everything!:pinkiehappy:
Warning though....
If you call yourself a horrible writer,
Or otherwise try to belittle yourself again,
I'm going to have to beat some sense into you,
Using a rusty muffin.:pinkiecrazy:

Thank You Soft Shell for the confidence boost. Although I'm kind of like a certain walleyed mare when it comes to muffins, even rusty ones.:derpytongue2:

3399443 You can get a pic of Cheerilee or the CMCs off the internet.

This pic more or less works.

It seems like a lot of bat pony names are latin :rainbowderp: mine included :scootangel:

3407056 This in one of my favorite stories on this site so far :scootangel:

3398071 It is about a Thestral aka bat pony.

I had a little problem with this chapter. Instead of telling her his plan, he could have just been friendly or something like that. Just put up an act and talk to her without her ever knowing the real plan.

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