Civil Protection officers are ruthless, mean, and abusive. They would beat up someone just for asking where Washroom is!
The perfect candidate for Discords plans. Before long, Discord teleported a certain Officer to his own realm to explain what his intentions were, there, he would then transport him to Equestria to wreak havoc.
Fun is gonna insue.
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Heavily Inspired by this story that recently cancelled. Civil Violations: An Equestrian Endevor.
Please dis-regard my Comment on the story, that was like a year ago.
Chapters (3)
This was probably rushed a bit.
The mid part of the story felt a bit rushed, but other wise I love it. The idea is nice and fresh rather than Gordon showing up and wrecking shit with his trusty crowbar.
3385993 DIDNT I JUST SA- Nah just kidding I know, And I WILL make it better in the future, I just wanted to have a little bit of un.
MORE!
Plz?
Buck it, MORE!
Hope this is not one of those Fimfics that end up having only one chapter, and no signs of any updates. I can't wait for more.
Oh my god I love half life 2, and the idea of the combine.(and I always wondered what the radio codes meant)So far I am loving this story, KEEP IT UP!
I feel like this song is necessary for the next chapter.
Civil protection is onto us! Head for the roof there is no time to lose!
Good god all these ´citizen lines..............
But best of all city 17 lines is still PICK UP THAT CAN!
3391188 NOW PUT THE CAN IN THE TRASH.
I see one thing wrong with this. You're giving our CP officer a personality. Don't. CP's are meant to be abusive faceless goons with stun batons and no personality whatsoever. That's what makes them CP's we know and love. This is what I personally would like to see in this story, I'm speaking for myself here, mind you. Anyways...
If you give a CP a personality, well they tend to lose their appeal as CP's. You know what I'm trying to tell ya?
3394779 I see where you are coming from, and I respect that. However, Civil Protection Units are regular Humans in Uniform, maybe a tough background and all. But they STILL have a personality.
If a CP ended up in Equestria WITHOUT a personallity, he would be tearing shit up without any remorse. And that doesn't exactly follows the Plot I have planned.
3394991
Hey, it's your story. However it'd be funny if he behaved like one of those CP officers in the beginning of Half-Life 2, if he disregarded the fact that there are magical ponies around him, that'd be a lot funnier. You know what I mean? Just an idea, lol
Is this a portal refference? I feel lik it is.
Dude, you've got a ton of unneeded capitalization going on.
3398979 Hehe
continue the story
Why you no continue story also why i no use good grammer
Come on,i want to see more
Also what the hell is the sex tag for
Apply.
Isolate!
10-4!