Rainbow Dash is best pony. Also, Trollestia is best princess.
Draco always wanted to know why Ratchet has mechanical wings, but he never did ask, until one day, when his love seemed down.
Ratchet always wanted to fly. But, she never could. Zealous Spike, one of Ratchet's close friends, just came up with a new prototype of mechanical wings, and he thinks that he can help her fly. But something goes horribly wrong.
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Well OK so let me help you out with one thing
That does not look right. I'll let you fix it.
So I'm intrigued in the story so far, I find it interesting to fallow another perspective in Ponyvill. Not a fan of the language... but it is rated teen for a reason, so I can't really complain can I.
Now, the Pictures... Allows me to see the ponies that are referenced in the story. Pretty cool, as a writer though-- I would suggest trying to use descriptive words to paint the picture. Now since you started the picture description format, don't stop, just expand your skills in the future.
I gave a thumbs up, because I like the way this story is going. Keep up the good work.
Mr. Flare
Just looked at the other story you wrote, I put it on my read latter list... looked pretty good.