Teatime with Apple Bloom
Zecora glanced around her warmly lit hut. Everything was in perfect condition for what was about to take place. Above a fire near the middle of the room a strong brew was bubbling, filling the room with a warm, pleasant odor with a vaguely bitter undertone that enhanced the overall effect. All that remained was for the other participant to show herself. Still, she wasn't due for another half-hour, so Zecora settled down with one of her books on local flora while she waited.
Moments later, as if she had been waiting for her cue, Apple Bloom let herself in. Her saddlebags were full of various herbs Zecora had requested she bring today, and the faint scent of sweat, hay and apples lingered on her coat. Not for the first time, Zecora wondered when, exactly, her friend and pupil had grown into a mare; like so many things in life, one could not draw a line and call one side 'filly' and the other 'mare'. She was in that peculiar time between getting her cutie mark and carving out a place in the world for herself that ponies call 'young marehood'. It was as good a phrase as any, but hard to work into meter, which soured Zecora against it slightly.
"Ah, it is dear Apple Bloom!" Zecora said with a smile on her face. "What brings you here so soon?" Apple Bloom's visits always brightened her day, whether they discussed brewing and herbal remedies, stories from their two very different cultures, or simply made the time to share tea.
"I guess I was just too excited to be seein' ya again, Zecora!" She hugged Zecora tightly, and Zecora returned the hug warmly. "Mm... ya smell nice today, Zecora."
"Wild rose and buffalo berry." Zecora made her own soaps, and was happy somepony actually noticed she was trying something new. "Thank you; won't you join me for some tea?" Zecora poured the contents of her kettle into a pair of wooden cups and set them by two matching cushions. As she settled down onto one of the cushions, she sighed comfortably. "What's new in Ponyville? How do they say it-- spill?"
Apple Bloom giggled, sipping at her tea from the seat next to Zecora. "Nopony says spill anymore, but that's not new. This is really good tea, Zecora."
Zecora nodded, a small grin showing her unspoken gratitude.
"Hmm... not really. It's been pretty quiet. I work on the farm as much as Big Macintosh'll let me, I paint when I can find the time, an' lately I've been spendin' a lot of time at the library. That an' lookin' forward to seein' you." She smiled brightly.
"You are too kind to me, young mare. I'm glad to hear how well you fare."
"Well..." Apple Bloom held her cup between her hooves and glanced away from Zecora, lowering her head. "It's not all good. I think I might have feelings for someone."
"You could use a companion," Zecora said between sips of her tea. "Who is the lucky stallion?"
"Honestly, they're not a stallion... not really a pony at all." Apple Bloom shifted uncomfortably. "We've been friends a long time, and I don't know what my family will think. I'm pretty sure they'd want me to meet a nice strong earth pony an' get married someday and start a family of my own. What if they think this is just a distraction, or worse, some kinda perversion?"
Zecora's eyes went wide; was Apple Bloom implying what she thought she was implying? The only way to find out was ask... no, it would be too strange if she was wrong. Just some general advice would do. "Your family will love you, no matter who you pursue. That is what Apples always do; they want what is best for you." A sip of her tea gave Zecora time to prepare another couplet. "Have you talked to the target of your affection? Do they yet know of your intended direction?"
"Not really. I mean, I've tried to drop a few hints here an' there, but nothin' I couldn't deny if they didn't feel the same. I've never had a special somepony an' it isn't like there's a book on this sorta thing-- believe me, I've checked --an' I guess I've been too worried to really say anything."
"Hmm..." Zecora thought back. The compliment on her scent, being excited about an otherwise routine visit, going out of her way to find rare herbs for her, despite her already busy schedule... it all added up to a fairly clear picture. She wasn't sure how to feel... there was certainly an element of unease at the inappropriateness of a student-teacher relationship, and she wasn't certain that she felt the same way. Still, the important thing at this moment was that she be supportive of Apple Bloom; after the confession was out of the way, she could sort through her personal feelings. "Miss Bloom, this is nothing to be ashamed of; the worst that could come is a one-sided love. I'm sure your 'friend' will understand... this could turn out to be quite grand. Just simply tell them how you feel; either way silence is not ideal."
Yes, that was perfect. Zecora smiled inwardly; this is precisely the sort of guidance she needed when she was Apple Bloom's age. Having to teach herself those lessons years later had not done wonders for her self esteem. Perhaps Apple Bloom could avoid the same mistakes Zecora had had to experience.
"Thank you! Zecora, you've been so much help. I'll be by later this week with the rest of the herbs ya wanted- oh, almost forgot." Apple Bloom emptied her saddlebags onto Zecora's small table. "Like I said, I'll swing by later this week. I'll be sure how to let ya know how things go with Spike!" She finished her tea, gave Zecora a friendly kiss on the cheek and dashed out the door.
Zecora had still not moved. Her face was a mask of shock. Slowly, she picked up her cup and drained it, eyes still locked on an unseen horizon. "...Spike?"
She poured herself another cup; no use letting tea go to waste. "I suppose it's for the best. She's nearly young enough to be my daughter, after all." By herself, she saw no need to rhyme. She chuckled as she busied herself with sorting through the various herbs Apple Bloom had found for her.
"Besides, she's enough to deal with as a pupil. Hehe."
For the first time in many years, her small, cozy hut felt very empty indeed.
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Poor lonely Zecora.
Very well done, though I do kinda feel sorry for Zecora there...
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Yeah, me too.
Awwwww.
I feel jipped. Poor Zecora.
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Let's just say I have a sequel planned.
Ouch. Right in the feels.
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I'd apologize but I think that's exactly where I was aiming.
Miiiight have caught myself with it too, though.
No! Zecora needs more love!
I give her both my hearts!
Oh, right in the heart
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Also thanks for the follow, Zeus!
Very cute.
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Glad you enjoyed it.
More Applecora! Or is Zebloom? I'll take any ship really, as long as it is well done.
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I prefer Applecora, and your wish is my command.
Look like Cover betray me here...
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Sorry about that.
Okay, so I will be honest, I really thought you were going to pair Zecora and Applebloom. And... I'm glad you didn't. You see so many fan fictions that have the characters bang each other or fall in love with one another. It was nice to see Zecora... not leading her on. I don't know if there actually is a sequel for this, but ... I really hope they don't get together. Or maybe you do it well, I don't know.
Anyway, the review. I really liked your style of writing. The descriptions were very good and created a good atmosphere. The story was simple, but really effective. It didn't need much to tell the story that it needed to tell and it worked the way it was done. Its one of those less is more kind of thing and I really liked that.
There was one moment where I felt Zecora didn't rhyme very well. It was 'Buffalo berry' and 'tea'. I mean, they sort of rhyme, but... It felt off to me. But that's nitpicking.
Again, I'm glad that Zecora didn't get together with Apple Bloom. I love Zecora, don't get me wrong. I think she's awesome, but... not with Apple Bloom. Not in that way and I am so glad that Apple Bloom didn't refer to her and instead referred to Spike. Which made me laugh by the way.
A great story. Short and sweet, but the descriptions were good. The story was misleading, but in a good way that paid off well and it kept me guessing. Great job and I can't wait to see more from you in the future. Take care.
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Thanks for this, and also for the follow and fave.
Honestly, if they DO get together, it wouldn't be for a very long time. AB has a lot of growing as a pony to do before she's actually ready for that sort of relationship.
I generally don't write 'shipfics' so much as I do... situation-fics? Unrequited romance, imperfect situations where both want it to work, relationships both partners know will end, relationships damaged by a struggle with identity issues, these are all more interesting to me than 'rainbow dash loves twilight'.
Trust me when I say that if they end up together I'll have justified it pretty strongly, because I'm writing the story not the ship.
Also she's saying it buffalò berrý specifically so it works as an awkward rhyme but I couldn't figure out a way to convey that in text til just now.
Oh that was harsh. Poor Zecora.