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Memories: Rainbow Dash

It's not easy pursuing or living the dream you always want to have. But with dedication and a little luck you just might pull it off. And the day that happens, you'll look back at it and say nothing. You'll just smile.

Inspired by the touching video by Spikero2, Memories: A Rainbow Dash 'Tail'.

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Allonsbro

Allonsbro #1 · Mar 2nd, 2012 · · ·

Not bad. Could use a little bit of work though. You did capture Dash's character quite well.
Give it a good read-over and you can catch the missing word mistakes.
One thing you could do is not just use stuff from the show. This leaves a huge gap in her life story. There's probably some stuff you could make up that would be pretty believable. Try talking about things like shows she did as a Wonderbolt