• Member Since 20th Oct, 2011
  • offline last seen Oct 5th, 2016

SirusAstro


Comments ( 11 )

okay, this was well written. But what was the point of this?

A little short but it's a good start. Will be interesting to find out how Angel gets over his sleeping problems.

236964
Whoops, I forgot to make this story as "Complete". Unless, a new chapter is wanted?

Your grammar needs a lot of work, but disregarding that this story is great.

(8 / 10)

236953
To see if I still got it, even if this story was short.

237218 no, i mean...what's the plot? Fluttershy sings angel a lullaby? is that really it?

237226
Surprisingly yeah, that's it. I guess I slacked off a bit on this and didn't think it through. It's been a while since I've written anything so my mind is working properly.

237246 like i said, you did a pretty good job writing it, the plot was just bland lol

237261
Thanks for the kind words. (Even though it honestly doesn't deserve it). :twilightblush:

236976

Oh, OK. Thanks for the clarification.

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