In the rain, the Cutie Mark Crusaders get astray in the Everfree Forest. Their friendship can only save them now.
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I like it
, will there be a chapter two?
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Highly unlikely. Though, if it is what the readers want, then i'll deliver. Perhaps just an epilogue.
Is that slender man in the background
Hey, I am a magician and I know that you have an alternate ending beginning with a beep. Looking forward to that
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W-what?!
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Shall I provide a link to the new chapter you've written?
Oh goodness I love to mess with people
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What kind of black magic are you using?!
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Rainbowmagic.
Quite the short thing, don'tcha think so? You maybe should've begun earlier in the main story to provide something deeper... - this ending is rather odd...
Wow, a 4.5 for this story? I'd say this is horrible, though thats my opinion on my own story. I thought this would receive a 2.
wow.
Dear Princess Celestia,
Today I learned that when you lose somepony close to you, like a best friend you shouldn't be sad,
even though losing somepony may be hard and it may hurt you inside, you might be able to learn something by looking back at your friendship
and seeing what you have been though together and what you learn and remember may in fact be beautiful,
so don't cry over the loss of a friend just remember all the fun times you had together and remember they might even be watching over you.
your loving subject NimbleBolt.
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Are you saying I did the letter wrong?
153521 NO NO not at all, that is MY letter to Princess Celestia about what I learned from your story. I just get a lot out of stories like this one they make me think about myself. so thank you for writing this and please keep it up.
Pretty good!
I will try to give critisim, here it goes:
I think you should try to go more into detail, like stating the tone of the ponies, the surroundings, the looks of the ponies. Also, I think you should spell Apple Blooms lines more like her accent, if you know what I mean
I got nothing more except for some misspellings, which I forgive.
Hope this can be helpful for future fimfics!