Chapter 1
Fluttershy slept in her bed, warm and cozy. The moon's glowing rays shined through Fluttershy's window, dust particles were visible in the light, and silence was left to be heard. It was serene. While Fluttershy dreamt peacefully, Angel struggled to rest in his own sanctuary. He shifted side to side repeatedly. Frustrated, Angel walked out of his shelter and hopped inside the cottage. He hopes Fluttershy could help him with his problem, she's a caring pegasus after all.
Through the darkness, Angel quietly hopped upstairs towards Fluttershy's bedroom. He slowly pushed the door, creeeek, it sounded. He navigated through the room to find Fluttershy's bed where Fluttershy herself will be sleeping. Using the shine from the moon as light, he found the bed. With enough but not too much strength, he jumped on top. Fluttershy turned to the left, facing Angel. He didn't hesitate, he poked Fluttershy on her hoof. She hummed and faced upwards. Angel frowned, he leaped on top of her chest he poked her again, on her muzzle this time.
Fluttershy opened her eyes. The sight of Angel made her smile, weakly. She stood up, rubbing her tired eyes, and yawning silently and somehow gracefully. She saw Angel's face, which looked tired and struggled. She laid her hoof on his head.
"Is there something wrong, Angel?" Fluttershy worriedly asked. He nodded yes. He started to act out his problem; he put both his tiny hands by the right of his head, he closed his eyes and snorted. Fluttershy slightly understood, she tried stating the obvious.
"You can't sleep?" Angel nodded yes, again.
"It's okay, you can sleep with me tonight, if you want to" Angel hopped once more next to Fluttershy, he made himself comfortable. She weakly smiled, once more. When Angel found a relaxing position, Fluttershy started to sing.
"Hush now, Quiet now...It's to lay your sleepy head. Hush now, Quiet now... It's time to go to bed...", She closed her eyes as so did Angel. She went back to her solace sleep.
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okay, this was well written. But what was the point of this?
A little short but it's a good start. Will be interesting to find out how Angel gets over his sleeping problems.
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Whoops, I forgot to make this story as "Complete". Unless, a new chapter is wanted?
Your grammar needs a lot of work, but disregarding that this story is great.
(8 / 10)
236953
To see if I still got it, even if this story was short.
237218 no, i mean...what's the plot? Fluttershy sings angel a lullaby? is that really it?
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Surprisingly yeah, that's it. I guess I slacked off a bit on this and didn't think it through. It's been a while since I've written anything so my mind is working properly.
237246 like i said, you did a pretty good job writing it, the plot was just bland lol
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Thanks for the kind words. (Even though it honestly doesn't deserve it).
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Oh, OK. Thanks for the clarification.
Cute!