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Diokno44


I am a memebr of the Guardians of Equestria fleet on Star Trek Online

Comments ( 3 )

I'd get a proof-reader for your chapters. A few simple errors that fell through the cracks here and there. Besides that, a interesting read. I'll follow this to see how it goes! :ajsmug:

this is a really good story, I am so ashamed of myself for passing up the opportunity to read it earlier. I must say your world is FAR more forgiving than the actual Metro universe but hey, we don't always have to have fate be cruel bitch to Artyom. In fact it's a nice little change. all in all, really good story

okay. I really like this story, but I digress. Please don't just copy Last Light, It was a nice story indeed but it would be such a waste for the world you've created if you just do Last Light. don't be afraid of making a few changes.

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