All mares in Equestria go through a very special time every now and again. In these stories, we will see a few lucky people who get to experience these moments first hand.
Can we see the continuation of this? I think Derpy is not the violent type of mare so I bet she will talk to him but forgive him because he has do so much for her and help Dinkie a lot before they become an item. Plus I always curious about how a human pony wedding will look like, or how Derpy looks on a wedding dress
3410856 Don't know really. I never intended for any of these stories to have continuations. tell you what, send me a PM, and let me know what your ideas are.
However, there's something that never got cleared up. How are the humans making it to Equestria? Extra-dimensional portals? Space travel? That thing in Avatar where you go into a dream sequence? Or can the humans just transport themselves at will?
Derpy is best pony. I read the chapter title and thought this was a male pony called storm with a female human or something. Btw, are you going to write any female human chapters? That might be fun.
3412076 Oh, since this series is just a collection of one shot, I never really ever planned on telling how the Humans and Ponies are going from here to there. I think it is a fun little thing to not tell, and let the reader come up with their own fun ways.
3412449 I am going to do a female Human here eventually. Not sure which stallion is going to be with her though. It is something I will have to look into.
"Look, I come here from Earth almost every single day. I stay over when I can. Then I go back to Earth to do what little work I can before I can come back here, to you." He then reached up and took her head into his hands, pulling her down and giving her a long kiss. "Yes, I love you, I love Dinky.
I always thought Derpy was fun and adorable, and the fact that she is a single mom still looking for love hits the heart. In a good way!
I got to say, this was just became my favorite chapter, close 2nd was with Vinyl and Pinkie takes 3rd. It's something about sex and comedy that just puts me in the best of moods.
And how you wrote those chapters, it would be crazy if you didn't insert yourself in the story. Self insert approved on any HiE story!
You know, if you do have women in Equestria, that will also have to include mares in the mix. Celestia knows there's a bunch of mares that don't care much for the other gender or just don't care what gender their special somepony is, period.
And I have to say this chapter with Derpy was the best out of all of them, bar none. So much potential just bursting at the seams, it's no wonder you're getting requests for more of this wonderful mailmare. Personally, I'd rather just leave it like so. Adding more might dilute the joy from this small peek into Derpy and Alex's life. Though, it might be fun to self-reference the shorts in later chapters. Nothing too obvious but a brief cameo, or prelude to future couples. Something to think about when crafting these.
By the way, since it's been asked by Derpy, what about Ponies on Earth? Will the stallion be on our side when he has that dalliance with the lady? And what kind of jobs can Ponies do over here? I'm assuming magic works so obvious stuff like Weather Patrol (true storm chasers that combat tornadoes could be a high risk, semi-hero type career) and Farming (Earth ponies wouldn't need all the chemicals we use to get higher yields of anything that grows) can be used as jumping points. Unicorns seem to be more academic however, possibly the medical field in addition to science. Not sure if this short-story format could pull off a convincing emissary or ambassador type unicorn since the only known pony that qualifies is Blueblood. Then again, there are unicorns that buck the system and seem to do everything they can to be the opposite of the academic type, like Vinyl Scratch (Too cool for books. Less talking, more music!) who is naturally the perfect foil for Octavia's upperclass attitude and expansive classical Canterlot education. And since we're freely trading across the portal, why can't some changeling get a little human lovin'? They're too small to turn into a human (unless you toss out the conservation of mass issue) and I'm certain there's a few bug-fetishists out there and besides, they can be painfully cute too at times. They'd also not be freaked out by us chomping on a McBurger, heck, they might ask for one themselves too.
3415136 Well, that was quite the thing you went on there. In short, yes, there is and is going to be PoE stories. The one with Fleur happened in her home that is in California. The one with Photo Finish might be on Earth as well, not sure. I am fully aware of, and fully support same sex relationships whether it is Pony or otherwise. I do not at this time plan on having any gay or lesbian chapters added however.
It sounds like you have nice little head canon world building up in your imagination there. I looked at your user page and saw that you didn't have any stories. Maybe you should give it a shot. But thanks again for enjoying the stories so much!
3413730 That made me laugh. It would be so harsh to do, but very funny at the same time.
3414801 Well I am glad this is your new favorite chapter. The ones coming after this won't be so self insert though.
Thanks for all the comments, votes, faves and support guys. Really makes my day to know so many are getting a kick out all the one shots. Kisses
That said, I'm just going by what's been written so far and extrapolating possible futures. I've also written, once. It wasn't pretty but it was a commissioned piece I did as a favor for a close online friend back in the 90's. Since it's fetishy pr0n, I can't link it here and I seriously doubt you'd want to read it anyway... i'm much better at RP where you only need to react and make up character facts in short 1-paragraph format.
I still want to fav the Derpy chapter again. Seriously, it's that good. Clop or not, the whole thing just clicks and makes me grin when I think about it.
3420844 It is my personal goal to try to make the readers of the chapters either get off, or laugh. Glad I made you do at least one. And Derpy is always hot.
3428432 I wouldn't be against using well know clop fodder OCs like Exie, or the Milkmare. But that would mean talking to the original authors and getting their permission to use the OCs. I would also have to be sure to get their personalities down so I could represent them honestly. It is something I would have to look into.
Thanks or the comments and support guys! New chapters will be up soon.
Wow, 'Sad, Silly, Sexy, Storm' was worth the wait. I'd put it as my 2nd favorite chapter you've made so far. I can see why some people would love to see it continued in a new story.
It will be interesting to see what you come up with for the rest of the mares.
3433529 Tavi will be getting her own chapter here soon.
3439438 I like to think so. Can't get off unless you are in a happy mood. Well, I can't anyway. Don't know about other people.
3443463 Oh I like to think I have some pretty nice scenarios in the works. My biggest challenge is coming up with original situations. I don't what to start repeating plots.
3450707 LOL nah, Derpy didn't beat him up. He was worried that she might. But I don't think I could see Derpy beating anyone up really.
Thanks for all the comments, votes and support guys! New Chapters will be up soon.
With Vinyl Scratch you piqued my interest. With Spitfire and Pinky Pie you had my undivided attention. But this chapter.... this chapter right here has won My favorite please take it it's the least I can do!
I loved it all so much it made me feel all fuzzy inside(and not in that way get your mind out of the gutter I meet is sweet and cute and sexy and loving all at once)
hey, can i make a continuation of this chapter for you or something? this is a heavenly amazing chapter. i feel i must write a follow-up to it.
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You haven't seen a black guy's dick, haven't you?
so many feels! these stories are adorable.
Can we see the continuation of this? I think Derpy is not the violent type of mare so I bet she will talk to him but forgive him because he has do so much for her and help Dinkie a lot before they become an item.
Plus I always curious about how a human pony wedding will look like, or how Derpy looks on a wedding dress
3410856imagine a whole story of how he met her you should make it it would be awesome
NOW YOU FUCKED UP.
Great chapter though, really great chapter.
That was actually really freakin' adorable. This is good! (Slams mug against wall) More!
3411768i still need the original author's OK to write it, cuz it's in a universe he created
3411897true if you ever do share the name you know
Favorite chapter so far!
3410856 Don't know really. I never intended for any of these stories to have continuations. tell you what, send me a PM, and let me know what your ideas are.
3411166 Thank you! I am glad you like them.
3411757 lol nah, she's not violent. I only put that in there as an internal worry. I know she would look just wonderful in a wedding dress.
3411792 lol, I did fuck up pretty bad there didn't I? I will go fix it now.
3411910 Guess it depends really. we'll see how it goes if he sends me a PM with his ideas.
3411931 Thanks! I am glad you enjoyed it.
This was quite the chapter. Long, but enjoyable
However, there's something that never got cleared up. How are the humans making it to Equestria? Extra-dimensional portals? Space travel? That thing in Avatar where you go into a dream sequence? Or can the humans just transport themselves at will?
3411934 Not as bad as my caps-lock usage suggests, but it's one of those pet peeves like there/their/they're.
Derpy is best pony. I read the chapter title and thought this was a male pony called storm with a female human or something. Btw, are you going to write any female human chapters? That might be fun.
3412076 Oh, since this series is just a collection of one shot, I never really ever planned on telling how the Humans and Ponies are going from here to there. I think it is a fun little thing to not tell, and let the reader come up with their own fun ways.
3412449 I am going to do a female Human here eventually. Not sure which stallion is going to be with her though. It is something I will have to look into.
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well, either way, can't wait!
How was that 12k words?!? It went by in a flash!
3412612 Fancy or Thunderlane! I vote them as male mates for the female human! Or just Thunderlane.
ew
Because of Dinky's extended vocabulary, you're going to be spending your first night as Derpy's boyfriend sleeping on the couch.
I LOVED this one. Please make something out of this one
I always thought Derpy was fun and adorable, and the fact that she is a single mom still looking for love hits the heart. In a good way!
I got to say, this was just became my favorite chapter, close 2nd was with Vinyl and Pinkie takes 3rd. It's something about sex and comedy that just puts me in the best of moods.
And how you wrote those chapters, it would be crazy if you didn't insert yourself in the story. Self insert approved on any HiE story!
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You know, if you do have women in Equestria, that will also have to include mares in the mix. Celestia knows there's a bunch of mares that don't care much for the other gender or just don't care what gender their special somepony is, period.
And I have to say this chapter with Derpy was the best out of all of them, bar none. So much potential just bursting at the seams, it's no wonder you're getting requests for more of this wonderful mailmare. Personally, I'd rather just leave it like so. Adding more might dilute the joy from this small peek into Derpy and Alex's life. Though, it might be fun to self-reference the shorts in later chapters. Nothing too obvious but a brief cameo, or prelude to future couples. Something to think about when crafting these.
By the way, since it's been asked by Derpy, what about Ponies on Earth? Will the stallion be on our side when he has that dalliance with the lady? And what kind of jobs can Ponies do over here? I'm assuming magic works so obvious stuff like Weather Patrol (true storm chasers that combat tornadoes could be a high risk, semi-hero type career) and Farming (Earth ponies wouldn't need all the chemicals we use to get higher yields of anything that grows) can be used as jumping points. Unicorns seem to be more academic however, possibly the medical field in addition to science. Not sure if this short-story format could pull off a convincing emissary or ambassador type unicorn since the only known pony that qualifies is Blueblood. Then again, there are unicorns that buck the system and seem to do everything they can to be the opposite of the academic type, like Vinyl Scratch (Too cool for books. Less talking, more music!) who is naturally the perfect foil for Octavia's upperclass attitude and expansive classical Canterlot education. And since we're freely trading across the portal, why can't some changeling get a little human lovin'? They're too small to turn into a human (unless you toss out the conservation of mass issue) and I'm certain there's a few bug-fetishists out there and besides, they can be painfully cute too at times. They'd also not be freaked out by us chomping on a McBurger, heck, they might ask for one themselves too.
Easily my favorite chapter. Well done!
You wanted to give Derpy a sweet story. Dou did that. That, and so much more.
3415136 Well, that was quite the thing you went on there. In short, yes, there is and is going to be PoE stories. The one with Fleur happened in her home that is in California. The one with Photo Finish might be on Earth as well, not sure. I am fully aware of, and fully support same sex relationships whether it is Pony or otherwise. I do not at this time plan on having any gay or lesbian chapters added however.
It sounds like you have nice little head canon world building up in your imagination there. I looked at your user page and saw that you didn't have any stories. Maybe you should give it a shot. But thanks again for enjoying the stories so much!
3413730 That made me laugh. It would be so harsh to do, but very funny at the same time.
3414801 Well I am glad this is your new favorite chapter. The ones coming after this won't be so self insert though.
Thanks for all the comments, votes, faves and support guys. Really makes my day to know so many are getting a kick out all the one shots. Kisses
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I did ramble a bit, didn't I? Sorry.
That said, I'm just going by what's been written so far and extrapolating possible futures. I've also written, once. It wasn't pretty but it was a commissioned piece I did as a favor for a close online friend back in the 90's. Since it's fetishy pr0n, I can't link it here and I seriously doubt you'd want to read it anyway... i'm much better at RP where you only need to react and make up character facts in short 1-paragraph format.
I still want to fav the Derpy chapter again. Seriously, it's that good. Clop or not, the whole thing just clicks and makes me grin when I think about it.
probably your best chapter yet, :l cant wait for more
never thought this, -> <- could be so hot. Awesome job man.
well, we know you now. mr self insert.
OMGNLCNQWOKCLEWKOPAF.......!!!!!
*deep breath* That was quite a nice piece, good sir. Thanks for the read.
Great chapter!
Pony back against chest whilst giving rubs is best position
At first I was like, "Damn Dinky!"
Then I was like. "Damn Dinky..."
It's liquid pride, totally different thing...
3420844 It is my personal goal to try to make the readers of the chapters either get off, or laugh. Glad I made you do at least one. And Derpy is always hot.
3428432 I wouldn't be against using well know clop fodder OCs like Exie, or the Milkmare. But that would mean talking to the original authors and getting their permission to use the OCs. I would also have to be sure to get their personalities down so I could represent them honestly. It is something I would have to look into.
Thanks or the comments and support guys! New chapters will be up soon.
Can u make one with Octavia? She's ny favorite BG pony.
3239064 I can do you one better, 13 is legal in Japan. Random information that doesn't pertain to the situation. Ho!
3429558 is it possible to jerk it and laugh at the same time?
Wow, 'Sad, Silly, Sexy, Storm' was worth the wait. I'd put it as my 2nd favorite chapter you've made so far. I can see why some people would love to see it continued in a new story.
It will be interesting to see what you come up with for the rest of the mares.
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In mah experiences, Ah've learned that, yes, a scenario where both things happen is possible.
And this story and particularly this chapter certainly seems to do quite well in making that scenario possible.
So uhhh, at the end. Did Derpy beat the shit out of him? Or did they settle the the situation?
3433529 Tavi will be getting her own chapter here soon.
3439438 I like to think so. Can't get off unless you are in a happy mood. Well, I can't anyway. Don't know about other people.
3443463 Oh I like to think I have some pretty nice scenarios in the works. My biggest challenge is coming up with original situations. I don't what to start repeating plots.
3450707 LOL nah, Derpy didn't beat him up. He was worried that she might. But I don't think I could see Derpy beating anyone up really.
Thanks for all the comments, votes and support guys! New Chapters will be up soon.
3451180 Laughing your ass off while furiously masterbating...that's HARD...flirtatious eyebrow raise.
Hello, are you willing to do one with Octavia? If so will you PM me?
lel, this song came up on basically the last paragraph, and indeed, Bubble Butt is good mare to be with
With Vinyl Scratch you piqued my interest. With Spitfire and Pinky Pie you had my undivided attention. But this chapter.... this chapter right here has won My favorite please take it it's the least I can do!
A favorite without Princess Celestia. I must be getting soft.
This is probably one of the best fics I have seen with Derpy. Most of them are just clop, but this one has an amazing back story to it.
I loved it all so much it made me feel all fuzzy inside(and not in that way get your mind out of the gutter I meet is sweet and cute and sexy and loving all at once)
Fuck you and your ability tm make me feel things!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
But serious man this is one hell of a story, 10 out of motherfucking 10
yay derpy