All mares in Equestria go through a very special time every now and again. In these stories, we will see a few lucky people who get to experience these moments first hand.
This is the best chapter so far, better than the one starring Vinyl. Also, DAT AUTHOR'S NOTE
I think there should be a Lyra chapter. She probably would like something more than hands, if you know what I mean. daviddarling.info/images/Descartes.jpg Hey, that'd work for a chapter name: "Lyra Wants More Than Just Hands". Could you do that? please?
I'd hate to nitpick, but I found some things in this chapter you may want to edit.
"And these other mare's thought I would like that too huh?"
That should be "mares" without the comma.
Her hooves began to raom up all over his shoulders, neck, and through his hair, and she wanted nothing more than to let him make her cum, and to have him unleash inside her.
That should be "roam".
to her, at that very moment, she could only imagine that this was what paradise felt like.
And lastly, because that's the beginning of a sentence, the word should be capitalized.
3223223 While that is an awesome song. I was more going for a fun little "Robber and Damsel" little RP between Rarity and her Human.
3239064 Oh she is not, let me check the legal age of consent in California............Uh oh.....Umm, 18 huh? Yeah well maybe she umm....No wait he was.....Nah, he was seventeen, and she popped his cherry. Lucky guy.
3246491 Well fortunately they haven't responded. So perhaps they did find another story they liked better. Which is a good thing.
3263976 Well thank you! That is quite a compliment considering how many Fluttershy fics there are.
3279397 Thank you for the upvote, and the fav! Taking your name into account. I am hoping you will also enjoy the Twilight chapter I have been working on.
You know, what Fluttershy did really fits her. Like a different fimfic that I once read....Found it!
Author's Note:
Now, if anyone is wondering why Adam drugged little Angel Bunny. I have a very simple explanation for that. Fuck him that's why, little bunny d bag. Kisses.
" Fuck him that's why, little bunny d bag." works for me.
*whistle*
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Authors Note: You are correct Sir
he is a d bag screw the bunny
That brings the number up to 23.
I told then that I was, you know, going into heat soon.
I think 'Them' would work better..
little bunny d bag.
Laughed so hard man
3220731me too lol
This is the best chapter so far, better than the one starring Vinyl.
Also, DAT AUTHOR'S NOTE
I think there should be a Lyra chapter. She probably would like something more than hands, if you know what I mean.
daviddarling.info/images/Descartes.jpg
Hey, that'd work for a chapter name: "Lyra Wants More Than Just Hands". Could you do that? please?
I can't wait for the clop with Applejack.
Angel needs to get laid.
3218645 Well I am just very happy this community, and stories like these have made you see your position in life a little better *hugs*
3218718 23? What are we counting?
3219440 Them would work better. I will fix that.
3221867 The lovely Lyra will be getting her own chapter soon. Just not sure what I want to do with it.
3222282 AJ's chapter is going to be a good one I think. I am liking what I have so far.
3222320 Angel needs to crawl into a running wood chipper. If they could put that into season 4, I would be a happy Pony lover.
Thanks for all the support all you sexy readers. New chapters will be coming out soon.
I'd hate to nitpick, but I found some things in this chapter you may want to edit.
That should be "mares" without the comma.
That should be "roam".
And lastly, because that's the beginning of a sentence, the word should be capitalized.
Well, depending on who you ask, it could be the same.
3223223 While that is an awesome song. I was more going for a fun little "Robber and Damsel" little RP between Rarity and her Human.
3239064 Oh she is not, let me check the legal age of consent in California............Uh oh.....Umm, 18 huh? Yeah well maybe she umm....No wait he was.....Nah, he was seventeen, and she popped his cherry. Lucky guy.
3245281 It's always the quiet ones.
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Another one of "these" posts. If you don't like it, then go away and read something like Cupcakes.
Upvoting for all the amazing chapters....
Fav.ing for the Rarity one.
3246491 Well fortunately they haven't responded. So perhaps they did find another story they liked better. Which is a good thing.
3263976 Well thank you! That is quite a compliment considering how many Fluttershy fics there are.
3279397 Thank you for the upvote, and the fav! Taking your name into account. I am hoping you will also enjoy the Twilight chapter I have been working on.
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I have been looking forward to the Twilight Sparkle Chapter, as well as the others you had the readers choose from in your blog.
I agree, screw Angel.
It's always the quiet one's! I'm surprised she didn't bend over and stick her ass in the air.
Angel's a huge FUCKING faggot.
I loved it all so much I loved when Fluttershy coursed it was kind of cute and sexy And Angel is just a Cock Block
I'm just going to leave this here...
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my face:
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Reaaaaally happy that the part about him not being a "heat chaser" was in there because my mind was screaming borderline rape before those few lines
The little author's note at the end lol, 5/5
hehehehe I thought this track, great work man
You know, what Fluttershy did really fits her. Like a different fimfic that I once read....Found it!
Best. Line. Ever. I swear I nearly wet myself.
That note at the end, I nearly woke up my roommates by laughing so hard.
I am here because waifufaggotry.
Fluttershy is best pone.
Angel is a cunt.
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This is the greatest comment ever. Of all-time.