All mares in Equestria go through a very special time every now and again. In these stories, we will see a few lucky people who get to experience these moments first hand.
Finally, a Pinkie Pie fic that doesn't mention/feature her psychopathic side or reference motherfucking Cupcakes. Good on you, sir. You have earned these moustaches.
3355348 Yeah Vinyl seems like a cool mare. She wouldn't be against having a boy friend. I just didn't want to do the soap opera ending. Glad you like it though!
3355663 Pretty tragic. I drive down the street and wonder how many cars I can jack then go sell to a random car shop for money. So far it hasn't worked out very well.
3355852 Thank you. I am not a fan of Pinkamena. And I really don't like Cupcakes. I think Pinkie is an awesome and sexy mare without any silly personality disorders.
3356199 It is either going to be about Photo Finish. Or possibly Derpy. I am very much into Derpy, and I want to make sure her chapter is very special.
An enjoyable read, loved the introductions that leads up to the main event, it made me chuckle with Pinkie Pie's shenanigans when she acts to her own accord without realizing what she's doing and sometimes puts too much effort in displaying those emotions, which I find that you capture her character quite well, so congrats on that part. The sex scene is good, quite the overload of puns and naughty speech, but it seems possible for Pinkie to act in that kind of play.
Overall, I personally find it one of my favorites when compared to your other chapters, with one of them being Vinyl. Keep up the good work.
That was one of the best writings of Pinkie Pie I have EVER read! She is a hard character to catch, but you did awesomely! Thanks for the chapter - have a mustache! Heck, have two!
3362946 Indeed there is. Luna, and in fact all the Princesses and even Chrysalis are going to be getting their own chapters. Just not sure in which order.
3363515 Two things you can be sure of when it comes to women in the sack. The quiet ones, and the crazy ones are going to be hellcats. So if you get one, just buckle up and enjoy the ride.
Thanks for the comments and support guys! New chapters on their way soon. Kisses.
That was funny and hot. For what it's worth, I think you did a great job with Pinkie. Even before the sex I was already loving this chapter. Her banter with, well....everyone has so damn funny. Great Job! Can't wait to see who's next!
"Then would you mind telling me about those loafs of bread you made this morning?" "What about them?" Pinkie said with a voice that made it sound like she was being accused of something. "There was nothing wrong with them. They were perfectly made. Fit for Canterlot elites even!" "I'm sure they were, dear. It's just they kinda looked like, umm," she paused for a moment while bringing her hoof up to scratch at her head. "Well it's just they looked like a particular part of a stallion. This is a family business after all. We just can't sell things that have that much umm. Girth, I guess?"
Dude never stop writing this stuff i love your work and your story's are awesome plz wright more stuff like about all the different mares and there "adventures" love the writing and this deserved its place in my favorites got to hand it to yea man grate job
Well, that was interesting. You know, I don't think the heat season has ever been shown in the show. It'd be....different....to show that. I'd watch it, though. Pinkie being in heat is a new concept. She's just not.....umm...It doesn't seem like she would be one to do....those things...
GTA!? oh no, how was reintroduction to the real world?
Finally, a Pinkie Pie fic that doesn't mention/feature her psychopathic side or reference motherfucking Cupcakes.
Good on you, sir. You have earned these moustaches.
3355899..............Dafuq?
Well the important is that you could make it, and what will be the next chapter about?
Pinkie is, to me, generally likable in romance/sex fics only.
...Why do I feel wrong for stating this.
Also the baking puns/euphemisms almost got too much.
3355348 Yeah Vinyl seems like a cool mare. She wouldn't be against having a boy friend. I just didn't want to do the soap opera ending. Glad you like it though!
3355663 Pretty tragic. I drive down the street and wonder how many cars I can jack then go sell to a random car shop for money. So far it hasn't worked out very well.
3355852 Thank you. I am not a fan of Pinkamena. And I really don't like Cupcakes. I think Pinkie is an awesome and sexy mare without any silly personality disorders.
3356199 It is either going to be about Photo Finish. Or possibly Derpy. I am very much into Derpy, and I want to make sure her chapter is very special.
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Yes, yes they did heheheheheheheheheheh Hope you liked it though.
3356534 Yes, I did like it.
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haha its ok, i think we have all been down that road at one point.
An enjoyable read, loved the introductions that leads up to the main event, it made me chuckle with Pinkie Pie's shenanigans when she acts to her own accord without realizing what she's doing and sometimes puts too much effort in displaying those emotions, which I find that you capture her character quite well, so congrats on that part. The sex scene is good, quite the overload of puns and naughty speech, but it seems possible for Pinkie to act in that kind of play.
Overall, I personally find it one of my favorites when compared to your other chapters, with one of them being Vinyl. Keep up the good work.
Remove the comma.
This should be "I-I-I just don't know...".
There should be a period after a Mr. or Mrs.
OK....
GrammarNazi.exe has crashed. Please try again in a few hours.
3356199 it would've been a back story in how she got her wall eyes
3357368
Oh that sounds really sad
3357497 the human fucked her so hard her eyes got messed up
3357742
Even sadder, and a little disturbing
3357832>>3357742 I assure you it is not going to be that.
3357109 Thank you. I will try to be more mindful of the grammar in the future.
That was one of the best writings of Pinkie Pie I have EVER read! She is a hard character to catch, but you did awesomely! Thanks for the chapter - have a mustache! Heck, have two!
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I'd say the human was the "dense" one here.
I actually think that this is quite enjoyable. Kinda makes me wish that I could travel to Equestria.
Soooo is there going to be a Luna chapter?
Well, now. Uh, I was not expecting Pinkie to be that...good...in the sack.
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-_Æ¢ ~ Classy.
3359633 Well thank you! I am always worried when I write Pinkie. So I am glad you enjoyed the way I did.
3362523 Yeah, he was kinda oblivious.
3362576 You and me both brudda.
3362946 Indeed there is. Luna, and in fact all the Princesses and even Chrysalis are going to be getting their own chapters. Just not sure in which order.
3363515 Two things you can be sure of when it comes to women in the sack. The quiet ones, and the crazy ones are going to be hellcats. So if you get one, just buckle up and enjoy the ride.
Thanks for the comments and support guys! New chapters on their way soon. Kisses.
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I vote for Derpy too!
Most believable sexual side of pinkie I've read in a long time. Well done.
After an event like that, Mrs Cake will have to cleanse whats left of the kitchen. Fire should do the trick, just to be safe.
Anyway, was a fun chapter .
Oh Pinks, yer such a delightful little scamp.
And then that ending.
Another delightful read as always, well done.
That was funny and hot.
For what it's worth, I think you did a great job with Pinkie. Even before the sex I was already loving this chapter. Her banter with, well....everyone has so damn funny. Great Job!
Can't wait to see who's next!
There is a clop with a creative plot, and a clop without creative plot. This story is clearly the latter.
great, great chapter keep em coming.
It's rare when a clopfic makes me laugh so hard.
Will our favorite milk mare get a chapter too?
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Your fucking profile picture combined with your comment made me laugh harder than this story has yet!
Don't worry, author, your story has made another thing pretty hard too.
Pinkie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ah yea
I loved it all so much it was awesome beyond awesome
Dude never stop writing this stuff i love your work and your story's are awesome plz wright more stuff like about all the different mares and there "adventures" love the writing and this deserved its place in my favorites got to hand it to yea man grate job
3355852 propane
Well, that was interesting. You know, I don't think the heat season has ever been shown in the show. It'd be....different....to show that. I'd watch it, though. Pinkie being in heat is a new concept. She's just not.....umm...It doesn't seem like she would be one to do....those things...
Anyway, good story! /
I guess she's referring to a pie in the oven?