wow this is well done

This was HOT

Her head phones were a blaze

like this?
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WAT
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3170247Also,

Rioght

shows up twice. I'm guessing someone pressed the "I" and "O" key simultaneously.

Not bad. You have my like. Time to check the next chapter

clopfic with Vinyl = my undying yes.

Kinda weird reading this since my name is also Eric

that was actually pretty sweet towards the end :3

Wow
Vinyl sure knows how to turn up the heat in clopfics.
Excellent job!

good show

I had a buddy that dated one for a while. She went into heat, we didn't see him for almost two weeks. The doctors say he might recover.

BEST LINE OF THE CHAPTER!!!

Half way is actually one word, and you do this a lot, separating a word into two. Would you like a proofreader?

I will leave human + pony to you (still can't believe you wrote one that's enjoyable; now I want to bang a pony)

My God, this was awesome

So hot and funny!

That was perhaps the most romantic, not really romantic, ending to a clop in recent memory... Or in other words...

I began to read this in a study hall at school today. Awesome job here!

Vinyl loves a nice hot load inside of her, no?

This was fucking hot.

I loved it all so much it was the best one with Vinyl that I've read so far I loved it it was the perfect amount of sexy and funny and sweet and cute all rolled in to pure awesomeness

Ahhh yea this is one ride I want to join in on.

This ....this is good.

This was hot and funny at the same time....awesome

It would have been a mix of awkward and funny, if unknown to them both, they recorded their sex sounds in the studio.

well done, eric...but seriously...DJ Thumper?

cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

Holy s**t you must be a serious muff hound and writing solely from real life experiences. I love how you put the chapter together with such detail and passion. You honestly should consider writing non clop stories to share your talent with everybody instead of wasting your gift on people like us.

3606914 Woah

No I need moar I need mah fix man, on a serious note good job 5/5

I would be lying outright if I said that this didn't get me like a rock. 6/5 for that.

What have I stumbled on to? I may have found another gem...

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Pretty sure it would just turn everybody on...

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You started reading this at school?... I like your style.

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Then you are the lucky one.

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Oh shit i commented on this