All mares in Equestria go through a very special time every now and again. In these stories, we will see a few lucky people who get to experience these moments first hand.
3712474 Am I continuing the series? Yes. Am I continuing the story with Photo. No. All of these are intended to be slice of life one shots. Although without spoiling anything, there may be a few callbacks to earlier chapters coming.
3713902 Yep, Zecora is going to get her own chapter here eventually. Out of all the mares I think she is going to be the hardest. Rhyming is hard enough, doing it while trying to sound sexy is really going to be hard.
3716899 Never really ever planned on having Humans use magic in this series. I do really like the idea of a Human gaining some odd features if they stay in Equestria for too long. I got the idea from Dune believe it or not. If you spent a lot of time on Dune your eyes would start to glow bright blue. In a real world application though, many people tend to gain accents if they live in another country for lengthy periods of time, I get a kick out of that.
3719073 It is rare to find a heavy drinker that isn't a complete moron when they are trashed. But I would like to think that Berry is a nice, cool and fun loving mare even when she is a little too tipsy.
3719874 Thank you very much. I am glad you are enjoying the stories!
Thanks for all the awesome comments, up votes and faves guys. New chapters will be out soon!
Its kind of funny the way 'heat chasing' is portrayed in this fic's world as being a bad thing when its pretty much a godsend for the mares. Normally they would just have to put up with being horny as hell with no release or get pregnant. The a species that wont get them pregnant shows up and its considered reprehensible for the mare and human to relieve each other.
I had a good laugh at the white night character doing exactly what the guy he chased off would do.
3720497 I don't think it is the sexual act between a Pony and a Human that is looked down upon. It is the fact that the Heat Chaser is using a moment of weakness to take advantage of someone. I always kinda though of it like that one guy that tries to score women on that are on the rebound, or guys that pick up women who got to be a bride's maid.
But as Berry tried to make him understand in the story. Sometimes that mare just wants to get laid too. So while it might look like she is te prey, she is in fact that one on the prowl.
3721102 I have never read The Golden Armor, so not sure which Bat Pony you are talking about. I think the only real fanon bat pony I know of is Nyx. It is something to consider as I have been asked if I am going to do stories about other OCs like Exie or Milky Way.
3721375 Well thank you for following the stories, and I am glad you like them. And yes, Trixie will be getting her own chapter here soon. Will probably be in the next three or four I think.
3721718 I don't think I meant to write him as having anything against Earth Born Humans. He just doesn't like Heat Chasers, or loud parties apparently.
Well that was fun to read. And sometimes even that drunk chick it a party have someone nice to look out for her, or she may find herself on the bathroom floor covered in multiple fluids.
"Stop laughing Rainbow! Taking advantage of drunk and horny females and bucking them even more senseless is not funny, and it's a serious problem!"
7467955 Glad you said it and not me. I'm much, much nastier about pointing that out. Seriously. This chapter with Berry punch is awful. This is basically the prime example of a beta-cuck, white-knighting, "nice guy's" wet dream come true scenario. I know it's all fantasy and shit, but this chapter borders on disgusting levels of wish-fulfillment for the weak.
I wanted to be turned on, I really did. But trying to get past the white-kniting and nice-guy logic/morals was too much for Mr. Happy to be bothered setting up camp if you know what I mean. Nice Guys are eye-roll inducing buzz-kills.
Other than that, I love this series! I hope you keep it up, Clopist! I know I am! Chapters 3, 7, 9, 11, and 12 were excellent!
>Sees update
>Chapter has best pony
>???
>mfw
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But as always, good chapter.
Happy new year!
Soo humans and magic, how does that work?
Yay more chapters
Damn that was hot.
Trust me, some heavy drinkers are a lot of fun to be around. Suppose Berry Punch is the same way? xD
That was awesome I loved it all it was sexy and had a lot of funny parts
3712474 Am I continuing the series? Yes. Am I continuing the story with Photo. No. All of these are intended to be slice of life one shots. Although without spoiling anything, there may be a few callbacks to earlier chapters coming.
3713902 Yep, Zecora is going to get her own chapter here eventually. Out of all the mares I think she is going to be the hardest. Rhyming is hard enough, doing it while trying to sound sexy is really going to be hard.
3716899 Never really ever planned on having Humans use magic in this series. I do really like the idea of a Human gaining some odd features if they stay in Equestria for too long. I got the idea from Dune believe it or not. If you spent a lot of time on Dune your eyes would start to glow bright blue. In a real world application though, many people tend to gain accents if they live in another country for lengthy periods of time, I get a kick out of that.
3719073 It is rare to find a heavy drinker that isn't a complete moron when they are trashed. But I would like to think that Berry is a nice, cool and fun loving mare even when she is a little too tipsy.
3719874 Thank you very much. I am glad you are enjoying the stories!
Thanks for all the awesome comments, up votes and faves guys. New chapters will be out soon!
Its kind of funny the way 'heat chasing' is portrayed in this fic's world as being a bad thing when its pretty much a godsend for the mares. Normally they would just have to put up with being horny as hell with no release or get pregnant. The a species that wont get them pregnant shows up and its considered reprehensible for the mare and human to relieve each other.
I had a good laugh at the white night character doing exactly what the guy he chased off would do.
If would be awesome if you could use a bat pony for one of these stories. Like the one from the story the golden Armor
These are a really awesome collection of oneshots ive been following this for far too long XD
I really wanna see a Trixie one eventually
Does Robert have something against Earth-born humans?
This was a delight to experience, as always. Keep up the good work!
3720497 I don't think it is the sexual act between a Pony and a Human that is looked down upon. It is the fact that the Heat Chaser is using a moment of weakness to take advantage of someone. I always kinda though of it like that one guy that tries to score women on that are on the rebound, or guys that pick up women who got to be a bride's maid.
But as Berry tried to make him understand in the story. Sometimes that mare just wants to get laid too. So while it might look like she is te prey, she is in fact that one on the prowl.
3721102 I have never read The Golden Armor, so not sure which Bat Pony you are talking about. I think the only real fanon bat pony I know of is Nyx. It is something to consider as I have been asked if I am going to do stories about other OCs like Exie or Milky Way.
3721375 Well thank you for following the stories, and I am glad you like them. And yes, Trixie will be getting her own chapter here soon. Will probably be in the next three or four I think.
3721718 I don't think I meant to write him as having anything against Earth Born Humans. He just doesn't like Heat Chasers, or loud parties apparently.
3726516 Well, loud parties are bad for your ear holes!
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3762588 Well thank you, I am glad I made you feel things. More will be out here soon!
Well that was fun to read. And sometimes even that drunk chick it a party have someone nice to look out for her, or she may find herself on the bathroom floor covered in multiple fluids.
"Stop laughing Rainbow! Taking advantage of drunk and horny females and bucking them even more senseless is not funny, and it's a serious problem!"
"..."
"Damn it, Rainbow!"
3729248 WHAT!? Can you speak louder for me please?! (Hehe I love being random :3)
Nice Bill Hicks reference there. :)
(unsure expression) I haven't the slightest idea how to describe this chapter, or my feelings on it. My boner is confused.
5433738 so what you try to say is "Not sure if gusta"?
Dear god this guy is a white knight moralist prick, okay enough chapter though regardless I love how Berry Punch acted throug everything
7466598 Y.. Yeah, actually. That's dead on.
7467955
Glad you said it and not me. I'm much, much nastier about pointing that out.
Seriously. This chapter with Berry punch is awful. This is basically the prime example of a beta-cuck, white-knighting, "nice guy's" wet dream come true scenario. I know it's all fantasy and shit, but this chapter borders on disgusting levels of wish-fulfillment for the weak.
I wanted to be turned on, I really did. But trying to get past the white-kniting and nice-guy logic/morals was too much for Mr. Happy to be bothered setting up camp if you know what I mean. Nice Guys are eye-roll inducing buzz-kills.
Other than that, I love this series! I hope you keep it up, Clopist! I know I am!
Chapters 3, 7, 9, 11, and 12 were excellent!