Are you going to do the princesses? Specifically Cadance?

Needs a little Luna, or maybe some Nightmare.

I'd actually love to see a sequel of this chapter.

3178790As a citizen of the United States, I am just as confused about our system as the rest of the world. Metric is so much easier.

"Why hello there Joshy," she said in a playful tone. "Do come in, and we can see if we can find a spot for you to put that big package you brought me today."

Oh, fuck me sideways...

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That is quite what she intends on doing

3180418 Only sideways?

3179596 I don't have one at the moment no. Send me a PM if you like, and we can chat about it.

3179897 Yes, all of the Princesses will be getting their own chapters as well.

3180418 Remember: Cheesy dialogue + terrible innuendo = hawtness!

3180985 Thanks for noticing. I will fix those right away.

Will you be giving Zecora some love as well? I think there's only two at the top of my head of Zecora x human.

3181764 Yes, the lovely Zebra will be getting a chapter eventually. Though it will take a lot of work as I am not that great at rhymes. But it will be super sexy when I am done with it though.

3179274 ;_;

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Oh... Oh man! I'm sorry, but am I the only one who couldn't stop laughing while reading this!?

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yeah it's cool
twilicorn is fine with me

Lucky little basterd. Got a job with UPS! pisses me off

3183085 I am taking that as a compliment on the fact that you like the comedy. If so, thank you. If not, meh.

3183349 Ah ha ha! I have converted yet another into wanting a mare for his very own. Don't worry, you are not alone as the group is much larger than some would like to believe.

3183473 HA! I made you lose sleep

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Oh totally! Yeah a loved the chapters, I just thought the last one was really funny for some wierd reason. But they're all very good, keep it up.

Has anyone ever considered if changelings go into their own version of "heat"?

Tho, it depends on how you envision them; as pseudo-insects, just the Queen does, or a very magic-alter-evolutionary-developed pony race, all the females do. (I tend to go with the latter theory since that lets the 'drones' have more personality and independence at both the personal and societal levels)

3184440 Well glad you like it.

3186072 I like to think as well that Changelings have their own heat that every one of their "mares" have to go through. Their natural form is very pony like, so thinking that they are just another race of Pony isn't to hard to believe. I have been toying with the idea of having a chapter here that would have Chrysalis in it. I would go with a cute little Changeling mare OC, but these stories are dealing with known characters.

3187232 Well thank you very much.

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Chryssy would be one demanding mare in the bedroom, heh. Luckily humans tend to be resistant to magic and this would include mind-control spells making it all the harder for Chryssy to just zap a guy into a sex-slave for her. She might actually have to... work to get a guy to rut her.

his pants, and his

You don't need the comma.

wanten, and seducing

Again, you don't need the comma, and "wanton" is spelled wrong.

continued, he had become

An 'and' between the comma and 'he' would make the story flow better.

Their lips met, and started to part one another

Once more, you don't need the comma, and what the hell () does the last part mean?

OK, Railroadbrony.GrammarNazi 1995 has crashed. Would you like me to recommend a proofreader?

3193694 Well that is quite a list! Though I must admit comma usage isn't my strongest point. I just use it when I think there should be a pause in the sentence. Thanks for pointing it out though, I will try to work on it.

"Their lips met and started to part one another." Well I guess that means their lips started to separate each other. I just didn't want to say lips again the same sentence. Hope that cleared it up for you.

I like humor and/or satire in clop, and this certainly qualifies.

And would it be wrong of me to suggest a CMC chapter?

3198575 Hmm. Well,I really can't judge. I mean I am sexually attracted to little cartoon Ponies, so it would be hypocritical of me I think. But no, there won't be any CMC chapters, aged up or otherwise.

Thank you for finding the comedy funny though.

Uh... what's with the cover?

3199441 Looks to me like it is Dashie waiting to have a good time with someone.

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3201483 Lol I'd sure as hell love to be with her. But alas, ponies aren't real... Fuck...

Every once in a while, I look back at what I'm doing with my life.
And it's sad as fuck.

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i agree my life was shit compared to my friends, now i'm part of this fandom and i read great stories like this.

everything just seems better

duel world

*dual

I don't know i just couldn't "get into" this chapter for some reason

Wait...he's seventeen...Fleur is PEDO!

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This story is so racist. He has a big dick, why? Because he's a nigra? You disgust me.

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No shes not sex is legal from the age 15 atleast in my country

I loved it it be awesome beyond awesome if like in other fics they can get them pregnant and have baby ponys with some human cartheristics so they get both a humen and a pony cuteness I love those so much

"You don't say?" Fleur said with a tone of sarcasm so thick that it was almost pouring out onto the floor.

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IT'S TIME TO D-D-D-D-D-D-DUEL!

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Just do the best you can.

I'm not sexually attracted to mares I'm attracted to females that just happen to be mares I honestly read clop for the plot (no not that kind of plot)

3479884 so many spelling errors

3405940 I will admit seeing the word nigra made me chuckle *slow clap* but its completely irrelevant that just because he has darker skin, he has a bigger dick-_-

my first story with fleur in it. I enjoyed it. you get the Buccaneer Brony Seal Of Approval.

"Oh Joshy! I just love big, hard, brown things," she moaned out, thinking that he had finally picked up on her seduction tactics.

"Well you are going to love this then," he said with a long pearly white smile.

"Oh yeah, I bet I am!"

"It's a really nice dresser! It's out out in the truck. I'll go unload it."

That is pure ignorance, if not utter stupidity. I mean, for God's sake, come on. Even I could catch that.