What happens when you dump a young recruit for the royal guard into one of the most savage battlefields around? What is this field of battle you ask?.....Politics.
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Da_Spy
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So it begins. I can't wait to see how this turns out.
Nice job. YOU GET SOME SPIKESTACHES!
Oh, and a like and favorite, but I'm sure you'll agree that the Spikestaches is much more important.
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Oh, sup Chrysaor. We meet in the most unlikeliest of places. You should know me, and if you don't... eh, whatever.
Alright, onto the story. First thing I see: Text Wall... Just a big long wall of text with no gaps between the lines and only tabbing to show paragraphs
I'm not going to say any more then that for now. I like the plot and the general flow as well, nice and character intros.
Bye!
~InfiniteZero
3188843 Thank you!
3189009 Yeah...Thanks. As for the wall of text. XD
3189626 Might I inquire... when is the next chapter coming out?
3189627 Im a bit stumped, I know what i want my problem is turning the words INTO what i want.....(that sounded odd XD)
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You have an idea, but you aren't sure how translate it into the written language. It happens.
If you want, I can pre-read for you and help you with that.
But if not, that's OK.
3189640 Eh sure. When i get it typed up ill let you have a read. *smiles* Just pm me sometime anyway. :p
3189009 Hi we do meet in the strangest of places
I finally got time to read it, and it's really interesting, this story have a lot of potential. I don't want to kill the OC, which is a good thing, and I actually like Spear. So I guess if you keep writing this story I will follow it carefully. It's one of the only one that interest me, and I have a lot of story to read
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*brohug* Thank you! ^_^
Edits and Suggestions:
"sarge" is a title, like Doctor. As such it should be capitalized or abbreviated (Sgt.).
Ill do more later... 'sigh' Sorry.