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Amazing chapter, i just knew the trio was connected to the Goddess.
And Lacunae...surprising. Will look forward to the next chapter!
lol, Rum is the word of the day
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Cap'n Rum!
May i have some cherry rum?
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Not sure if serious
Ha Lacunae PH I see what you did there lol anyways good chapter
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Thank you. Glad you knew who Lacunae is, not that I didn't expect you [or anyone else] to but I was trying to make reference to Horizons to remind everyone that this is in the same world and of course, there is going to be the odd snip of mentioning someone/something that's somewhere else.
Doesn't at all mean that I plan to involve Lacunae at any point at all in any form - I don't, she's Somber's character and it would be rude of me.
However, simply to make a passing reference as she's the only other alicorn that -I- know of to have that freedom? Absolutely!
Again, thank you. Means a lot to me to see these responses.
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You know it, dude. Thanks for being cool with letting me slip that one in! Did you like how Titan was drinking it, too?
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Sorry, no such thing as cherry rum, as far as I've ever been aware.
Though the idea of rum mixed with cherry does intrigue me.
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My only regret is I forgot a part, though it'll probably work even better as the start of next chapter, so that's something more to look forward to!
Thank you.
I feel bad about having made the chapter wait this long, but I'm glad it's receiving positive replies thus far. Sorry to make you all wait so long.
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Its no problem, trust me. But this was so worth the whole wait.
Good chapter, well done. Only a few things:
1.
I'm quite sure that was an actual balefire bomb.
2. I kinda missed something like i.imgur.com/8LU71.gif
That's it. Error report comes per Steam as usual.
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AH GOD DAMN IT. WHY DIDN'T I CONSIDER WHY IS THE RUM GONE?
It's too tempting to add into the chapter... but there's always another chance with this upcoming chapter!
Haha!
I'll have to double check that, it's a minor mistake but it'd be nice to get right.
Thank you <3
I think I'll post this review here, as well as on Cloudsville. It isn't formatted like my other ones but I hope it'll be useful in some capacity. Since I don't think there are spoiler tags here, I'll make it bright yellow.
As usual, I read the last bits of my last review to remember what was going on.
Clingy colt is adorable.
Good question. What could be happening here...
Admiral Pip's Rum. Hehe.
Yeah, Cherry was bound to get mad at that.
Storm seems to be obsessed with wings. This is interesting, and they'll probably get along just swell.
Wings: +1 Charisma.
Dat meaningful chapter title. He was a Steel Ranger too. Interesting.
Maybe they can rescue Pony Joe... or any plan will just fall apart and fail quite miserably.
Crimson? Well, he wouldn't do it willingly and he's not going anywhere. Also, blatant disobedience.
Oh no! The Coalition may have found the location of the rubble base!
And, less humorously, he lost a friend. Poor guy.
"Titan put his hoof on the bucks shoulder and nodded."
"buck's".
I like poker but I've never been good at it.
I wonder if the alicorns can read his hand from his mind.
Cherry has a chance for a flush. But that'll probably not resolve.
Or it shall. What a twist.
Cherry wine for the Cherry mare. What could possibly go wrong?
I wonder if Titan is any good at poker. Information looks like a valid betting material.
I wonder just how much booze they have.
Big question from the winner.
With a large answer.
Alcohol usually doesn't taste very good, so of course, Sandstorm wouldn't like it.
Suddenly it is go fish. He he.
And that is a bigger question. This could get messy.
Meh, looks like he didn't muck up. It was a really long answer, though.
"Where's the rum gone?"
Bestest bluff evar. A straight flush is almost the highest you can get, a royal straight flush is better.
I wonder just what has happened to the alicorns other than the whole Goddess bombing.
Err mah gerd. Acknowledgement of other fic being canon. Actually, not unexpected.
The Destroyer. Pfft.
History! Goody!
Iron Giant must be pretty important.
A large automaton, probably. The Iron Giant is the name of a movie that involved Lauren Faust, as you likely already know. Good movie, I watched it dozens of times growing up.
Re: footnote.
It wasn't boring at all, really. I kinda only skimmed the mushy parts between Crimson and Cherry, but they were interesting all the same.
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Thank you Ketch, as always it's absolutely wonderful to have your reviews and it means a lot to me. Thank you.
I'm glad that you managed to catch a lot of the references.
True that a royal flush is higher - I just didn't want to give Crimson the absolute highest ranking hand and make it a complete mary sue moment where he's given the very, very most elite stuff to achieve his goal, even if that is a hand of poker.
I'm glad it wasn't boring for you, even if you did skim over the mushy stuff - I expect that to be done by some people as it's not to everyone's tastes, just like Katarn skips over intimacy & fight scenes. (of just about every fic.)
So as long as you enjoyed it, it doesn't really matter. That was just me giving them some mushy mushy happy happy loving tender moments.
Sorry I can't give a full response right now, gotta head off to work, but again, thank you for this, it means a lot.
I loved that poker scene
This chapter now has some AMAZING art dedicated to it, commissioned by a friend of mine for me without telling me that he'd had it commissioned. He knew I'd always wanted this particular scene done and particularly by this artist.
Brisineo has done amazing work on this, and it really does deserve some love. So make sure you show him some!
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A picture I should have attached to this chapter long, long ago!
A very good chapter with character development is always fun.