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"Arcus Audicus: Cherry - Level up!
Arcus Audicus: New perk - IF KIPPER TOUCHES YOU/YOUR RELATIONSHIP WITH CRIMSON HE WILL DIE"
AHAHAHAA ...I'm serious.
"However, if you think this chapter is amazing in any way, PLEASE let me know. PLEASE."
It's definitely amazing, Crimson/Kipper. Also, heheh, nice "authors note" at the end. Congrats with everything btw. You have reached the pinnacle of BRILLIANCE and it is SHOWING.
Congrats for writing such a long chapter. Was a really good reading.
good I liked it and the ending makes me wanna read the next lol
cock blocked my a mini gun? that's new aaaaaand a merry Christmas to you too! And the Long chapter, the effort payed off! Love it
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Thank you! Sorry I made it so long that it takes forever to read, haha. I'm very, very glad you enjoyed it though. Means a lot to me to know that my audience are enjoying themselves.
Yes, you're right on the not sparing enemies part, as far as I'm aware anyway.
Just about any protagonist (barring Blackjack in 33) would kill a rapist as they're raping or just after having done it. Most protagonists would probably kill a rapist who had no regret over it, as well.
However, I really was tired of the whole "gotta do better!" thing that everyone had going on. Crimson knows that doesn't happen.
You aren't going to change if you hadn't changed before, death knocking on your door isn't an invitation, it's a freight train telling you that you're the next stop and it has no brakes. So yeah, I'm glad you enjoy that aspect too. Like I say, too many soft hearted protagonists who just forgive far too easily and let a possible threat continue to do as they do.
Lastly, it just makes sense. A large alicorn with the same kind've toughness as any other pony would not only go against Kkats canon of them being tough as nails, but just wouldn't make sense at all. They should be tough both in ability to handle pain but also on a physical level. Still, they can be soft to the touch all the same though. It's not rhino skin! Hah.
Anyway, yeah. Thank you, it means a lot to me to see your comments. I'm currently working on the next chapter and I'm pretty sure you'll enjoy the very beginning, though I haven't gotten too far into it just yet. (just under 3k thus far) so yeah.
Amazing