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SAAD that was sad man, cant wait for the next chapter this one was really good
To copypasta my authors notes from the ninth "chapter" piece:
A post I made on Cloudsville about the story has had someone ask me never to go as dark as chapter eight again. I'm inclined to agree.
This is my response to the post in mention:
I don't think I need to after this. The trauma to Crimson has been dealt and that takes away from his whole "I'm untouchable, nothing phases me" streak, which was a point of complaint by some.
I personally prefer the lighter side of things myself too. Though I will keep this chapter as it is unless there's an absolute uproar over it
I've shown how dark the wasteland truly is to Crimson, I've given him the emotional scar and he'll never heal from this. Never.
It's true. Crimson wont ever be able to remove these events from his memory and he will never truly heal from it.
It's also true that I don't believe I have to go this dark ever again - like I say, the realisation of the wastelands worst has hit Crimson and he no longer holds naive to what it's truly like.
If you all decide that this chapter was too dark, too much - I will edit it to an small extent, though I promise you, that was the only time I ever plan on going that far as I honestly do like the more lighthearted parts of the wasteland.
This was my Arbu. This was my chapter 33 of PH.
I hope that no-one finds this a reason to stop reading entirely. I don't plan to ever do anything this horrific again, but making it painful for both the readers and Crimson was my intention.
Crimson now has the experience needed to go on with the story, as strange as it sounds.
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I'm glad I hit my target reaction for you. I'm also glad you don't feel the need to advise me to tone this chapter down any - though I will if asked enough.
I'm sorry I had to do this.
How jolly.
I was more than confused when the Ghoul began raping one of them, but Titan's explanation reminds me of the Los Plagas, from Resident Evil, which could accentuate certain traits, like excessive greed:
What a' yah buyin'?
You missed the sadness registry. I'm too cold, I guess. But the Chapter was not in excess, but I can see the lasting repercussions in Crimmy will be dire.
I cried. You said grimdark. And you brought it. Personally. I probably would have ended her life to show her mercy. That may sound horrible. But I've seen near death and the pain it brings.
Great chapter, just enough grimdark to mindfuck ol' crimson, but not "sweet apple massacre tier" grimdark where it's over the top dark like some straight out of the Spanish Inquisition shiznit.