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"I was a human once, I think. Now, for some reason, I'm a pony. The only reason that I know that I was once a human, are accounts of others, and returning memories."

Follow the story of a man self proclaimed as 'White Wind' as he makes his way through his subconscious and his new life as a pony, and tries to recover his real past.

For those reading this because of the sequel, please still read the sequel after you read this, even if you hate this story. Reason being, you read this to understand the sequel, so if you don't read the sequel, then you kind of wasted your time.

Edit: Changed the description of White Wind slightly.

Sequel to this story is named "The Life Returns"

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 48 )

Neat, looking forward to where this goes.

I woke up this morning to see a new chapter after I went asleep, I come back and see another new chapter. (Meant to post this earlier but it never loaded)

i do my best to post each day

3042098 And it is driving me crazy. i can only edit so fast. :pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy:

It's fine, just do your best and send them back when you can. Also, don't get so caught up in editing that you don't write your own story, A Shield's Shadow, which people should check out.

3047449It was just a joke i can handle it

:applejackunsure: I don't think Rarity would charge that much for a FRIEND in NEED! :duck:

Comment posted by Dress72 deleted Aug 15th, 2013

He isn't really in that much of need, as he came up with the idea on the spot... and it takes a lot of fabric to create a parachute.

Comment posted by Meynbuhdei deleted Aug 15th, 2013

Hey, umm.. Why does he need the parachutes? Why doesn't he stack clouds on clouds dense enough to make a landing pad.. Of course, It would be one BIG cloud to slow a pony at terminal velocity. If there is a flaw in this logic, please point it out. Would love to see ↑↑↑! :pinkiesmile:

Flaw: Parachute isn't for him... He has wings.
Flaw: String within clouds, even if it was a dense cloud, string would slice through it. Planks work because of surface area.

although the large landing pad would be amusing, it is not needed. also, there isn't a flaw with the cloud landing pad, it would need to be a very dense pad to stop a pony going terminal velocity or faster.

3048710 Ok. Thanks for constant reply. I helps.. :pinkiecrazy:

“Reasons upon reasons.” I said tactically avoiding the question.

Dude you stole my line. and why didn't i see that when i edited it? I dunno i confuzled.:derpytongue2:

IDK... but I prefer to call it, borrowing a good line.:raritywink:
btw, you only say that sometimes, not in your story, I've checked

Your upload times are so random.

I know... it is basically whenever I get them done, and I'm awake at different times of the day, seeing as I am currently on summer break with no reason to hold a steady sleep pattern.
when I go back to school in two weeks, then I will most likely post at a more steady and consistent time.

I will also try to post at a more regular time.

3060310 2 weeks D: I go back Monday. But don't worry, a random upload schedule isn't bad.

3060310 Yay for unhealthy sleeping habits

:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy: Sleep? wat is dis sleep?

I really want to dislike this story...but I can't make myself!

Thought I'd hate this story from the first couple of chapters but it has turned out to be pretty damn good so far.
I like these acronyms you're coming up with to insult people, very nice :pinkiehappy:

I am glad that you two think of it like that. I feel like I'm getting becoming better each chapter

Yay, I officially have more comments than votes!!!!

3064107 votes are thumbs ups right? If so I would but its so far away...

I mean votes as in both thumbs up and thumbs down... and all votes count.

Comment posted by Hydran deleted Aug 24th, 2013
Comment posted by Dress72 deleted Aug 24th, 2013

Great story! You should do a sequel definitely!:pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Dress72 deleted Aug 25th, 2013

This guy's silly.

Nice! this went from 33:10 to 34:9

The image of a tornado following a pony to the ground then smashing into the ground blowing away everything as the pony made a perfect landing is etched into my brain and it is fucking awesome.

He's a pegasus with the ability to create a tornado that can easily tear the shit out of a mountain side...and they want him to be in control of the town's weather?

That shit legit!:rainbowlaugh:

How you gonna borrow it?
Is you gonna give it back?

With all the things he has done so far, in this chapter alone, and with how easily he can piss off Celestia, I'm surprised that that nopony is accusing White Wind of secretly being Discord.

Thank you man! Thank! You!I've been trying to find out what P.S. meant for years! Unfortunately, I live in Louisiana so no one around here knows what the Fuck that is!

:pinkiesmile: This is really good. I like everything about this story.

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