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thesilentpony


Darkness will always end up out lasting the light.

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This story is a sequel to The Innocent Pony


The Desert Pony is a monster to only those which know her ravenous hunger, rather it's gem or dragon the desert pony will eat anything and everything.

This takes place in the same universe as rotted spike, is the third story of the darkdream pony(reading suggested, but not needed)
updates will be slow, working on a bunch of stories at the moment
Warning:has suggested scenes of sex, but plenty of gore, just not descriptive, light language

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 22 )

This is sick and I shouldn't enjoy it this much...

I love it! Don't stop.

Rule of thumb for minerals: If it's shiny, chances are it tastes awful and is too hard for normal teeth.

3085073
only if your human and don't have magic:rainbowderp:

3085077
Still too hard for ponies.
But I bet Roma could eat them.
Speaking of Roma, why wasn't her father named Romulus? It'd be a great reference to the Roman Empire, since you'd already named her Roma.
Wait, have you actually named her father yet?

3085107
this goes before this story
it's pretty much crap, but this is her father
the innocent pony

That is plain freaky! Yet so intresting... :raritystarry:

Huh... is it bad that Roma is my 2nd favorite MLP character? :pinkiesmile:

...:facehoof: Wha...:pinkiecrazy: not sure what to say bout this chapter...

Studyed in the caves for 2 years eh? intense study seems to be a reacuring theme throughout the storys of yours ive read so far,
and I'm a bit curius to know if you are someone who spends a lot of there time studing,
of course who you are and what you do probably dosent correlate with the interests of your charecters, in the sence that they are a reflection of yourself,

5080017
yes i know several people that study all the time

this story has been goin really well..till that chapter 6, pretty much nothin but pointless drama and it looks like the stories only gonna go down hill from here cause itll be really hard to make up for that last chapter. its a shame too it was legitimately entertaining and was goin really well till then. : /

5172744
gotta say im honestly surprised. usually when i make any kinda negative opinion or statement about someones art or writing i get the artist/writer and about 5 or 6 of their brown nosers ridin my ass about how i dont know what im talkin about or im jealous or some bs like that, you gotta be the first whose ever just been like' sounds about right' about it. good job that definitely caught me off guard. XD

5174485
this is one of my earlier works and it needs heavily editing and i need to finish posting it

Has this been abandoned because it ended on a cliff hanger, at least give us an ending to the story ;-;

8963719
other things go in the way and i just never got around to it

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