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Gamel_Lightshow
Hmmm. Where do I start? Well first off I'm the leader of the Wolf Army and stand proudly as a brony. I love to write and read and do my best to struggle day after day for a new leash on life.
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Get a female human in there. Plz, don't kill the human race,
2971790 Don't worry I plan on adding others
2971886 Wow, response within 30 min.
2972084 Yea I tend to camp fimfiction for the stories and I tend to write a lot probably wouldn't replies earlier but I was playing league
2972101 New chapter soon?
2977266 hopefully I'll have it finished by tommorow
2977288 Yay!
needs work but shows potential
Luna discord join up with the humans and over thro Celestia
more
someone deserces to die
2995420 Oh come on it was only just the house lol
I really like this story and where it is headed. Keep it going.
3074451 I promise I will on that. This is really a side project I really want to do
Celestia must die
Ignore the 18 disliking wankers mate keep the chapters coming
3242462 Will do!
needs grammer work and some editing but still not to shaby
3243834 yea its a little edgy sometimes I miss stuff along with my editor
Also you could make the chapters longer
why flutters why?!
yet another good chapter my friend keep them coming
Nice
I'm usually not the one to criticize but take a look at this guy's work null
you just need to make you'r sentence's a little neater all tho you'r story it's self is one of the best thing's i have had the pleasure of reading keep the chapter's coming
dude dash is kind of hard not to be dead or at least brain dead being well burned alive and all
3484810 I know but it'll be explained in the next chapter after all the arguing deems down with all the people I have on this idea
yet another good chapter
I have no clues about what you tried to write in the description o_O
instead of turkey can we just carve up Bitchlestia
3551585 lol I like that idea
3551559 Oh just wishing thankgiving and to not kill turkies
Yup I am pissed
Lol good old Discord
XD at this point your just having fun with this story
3859831 I am
Awesome chapters you are doing a amazing job I can't wait to see the next chapter
5492727 The next chapter might be a while since I've been out of the loop with the two people that give me the reason to write this. Though I will be able to continue you hopefully soon when we get together again.
Let the civil war between the six begin.
Long live Humanity!
Awesome chapter so far i can't wait for the next one
5579160 Humanity! Fuck yea!
5580582 In do time my friend. In do time
I feel the need to bring this up because I don't think anybody else who's commented on your story has. I'm fairly sure you want the audience to sympathize with the humans here, and to feel that they deserve to be free to take down the oppressive tyrants that enslaved their people. To defeat Celestia and her govt. One problem.
You backed yourself into a corner with the backstory that you drew up for the story. The very description of your story reveals how humanity gotten enslaved in the first place, and it basically states that they started a war of aggression, kept losing, and then finally lost and was made slaves.
So you essentially want us to feel bad for people that tried to take over another world and got taken OVER instead. That would be like feeling sorry for the south for trying to spread slavery, only for them to not only lose the Civil War, but to end up as the slaves for everybody else in the United States instead. They got what they deserved. As did humans in your tale. It's not like you do a good job portraying them as victims, people who were unfairly made into slaves for no reason. They started it, and now they're upset that the other side finished it.
And yes, knowing that humans are being experimented on IS bad, but it doesn't change the fact that they wouldn't be in the position of being experimented on to begin with if they hadn't started a WAR.
5591005 Welp. That's not the actual backstory. I can't really say anything right now, but I will say that they didn't necessarily want a war.
5591815
If it's not the actual backstory, it really shouldn't be on the very thing that introduces the readers to your tale.
5594478 well. The thing about it is that it's one backstory. Remember. In this story history has been rewritten by Celestia so the ponies are ignorant of their past.
Do you mean seldomly?
5621506 Oh... You see. I'm trying to write using my T.V screen and I swear that a lot of these words look different.
great chapter
