In what seems like a perfect world, Lilac Apple watches Equestria from heaven, as her murderer wanders the streets of Ponyville, his actions affect Lilac's family for the worse. She sees her younger sister depart from the family, her father become obsessed, and her brother grow up knowing the word "gone" better than most foals should.
Between throwing up and the tears I feel like there are a lot of feels coming from here. When I say throwing up I speak metaphorically at the fact that I have been reminded that these kinds of people exist in this world. I hurts to know that this kinds of evil is here and there's just no way to stop it sometimes. But it reminds me of the good too...well written so I guess the dislikes were more for the gore and pedopony than anything else. I like it. Keep it up
*lays down with tears streaming from eyes* Whhhyyyyy?!
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I know the feel, bro... When I read The Lovely Bones, I had the exact same reaction
: Twilights sheriff of Ponyville ?????
A few mistakes
I think you mean her
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whoops
More please
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I'm sorry; I've been meaning to add. I have no computer access at my mom's house (where I am on the week-end), and the weeks are consumed by homework. Luckily, I'll have time to draft this week-end. I'm very glad you yearn for more, though.