When Twilight and Applejack explore a mysterious cave on the edge of Sweet Apple Acres and things go awry, they are quite literally swept away into a world of darkness and ancient secrets, in a cave far beyond the reach of the Sun--where a relic of the past lives on and flourishes under the light of the Moon.
Deep within the heart of the earth, a colony of nocturnal ponies lives on who left Equestria in disgust after the defeat of the Night Mare at the hooves of Celestia. However, what will they think if they learn that their Princess has returned after a thousand years of waiting?
Inspired by DuoCartoonist's "Children of the Night".
Chapters (7)
wow
This has potential indeed, but somethings seem a bit rushed and choppy. Never the less this is a great story and I encourage you to continue.
Good luck with this story.
stupied sun love poines my precious
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2981346 I'm workin' on it; I'm currently almost a thousand words into the next chapter.
And it will, in fact, include bat ponies. o3o
8/24/13: Jus' about finished the next chapter, but I'll post it at the end of the month--I'm going to post new chapters on a monthly schedule, if that is all right with you guys. ;3
Luna Queen of Equestria FOOORRRREEEEVVVEEERRRR
This is awesome. keep it up.
Wow
Keep writing
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3239142 Okay!
I've already planned to explain pretty much everything in the next chapter, and I Pinkie Promise not to end it in a cliffhanger. 
I can't complain I've got a story that hasn't updated for a YEAR in my favs
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I'll wait for the next update eagerly.
You can't but Luna can.
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Luna: WE SHALL FREE OUR SUBJECTS
That was very good. I liked it. Keep it up and I can't wait to finish it.
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Now Princess Luna has returned the Children of the Night can be at peace with the Sunlovers.
Huh? What's happened? The story says complete, but you have yet to post the final chapter. May you provide an explanation, please?
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I suppose it's high time I spilled the beans about that. The answer is frustratingly simple.
When I write, the tone of my work mirrors my mood. After writing what I planned as the penultimate chapter last December, I decided to wait until I felt happy so I could write a happy ending.
A week or two ago I gave up waiting.
Sorry, but that last chapter is truly the last. All of the loose threads left can probably be tied up by the readers themselves.
That was probably the last chapter of pony fanfiction I'll ever write, since I have determined that my presence is detrimental to the brony fandom. It's a shame, really...I was going to end this fic and my Elements of Disharmony fic with chapters of the same name, "Dawn."
(If anyone I know through FiMFiction is reading this comment, consider it a goodbye.)
5029227 Aww
I'm very sorry to hear that. It would have been super cool with the final chapter things for your stories, but I know it's your choice, not mine. I hope that your mood improves soon, and that you find something else to love and cherish. As a side note, you should probably change that "Complete" to a "Cancelled", because it isn't complete and it is not going to continue.
Have a good life, man.
I'm guessing Luna didn't know about this?
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Well that's quite disappointing