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jszellmer
A paragon of mediocrity who heartily encourages you to spend your hard-earned free time reading someone with actual talent.
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It needs a bit of a tune-up in terms of the writing, but it could otherwise be a good start to a story.
Idk what to think...But I guess ill even the like/dislike bar out by giving you a like..mmk
i like it
2826333 You're right on the quality end. The idea's been running around in my head for a while and I wanted to try out something more 'mature.' I do admit to throwing it together last minute, and I'm not the best writer, so I'll probably go back and edit it if I have any good ideas. I may go and make a second story dealing with the fallout of the revelation and hopefully it will be better than this one.
Nice ending
2840242 Thanks. I really appreciate it. One of the things I was going for was to give it a bittersweet ending; have hope for the future while avoiding 'instant forgiveness.' I also wanted to have the characters confront a situation in which there weren't necessarily any good answers, just being forced to choose which 'unpleasant' ending they would have to deal with.
333 views. Woohoo. I don't know why that impresses me, but it does.
Maybe it's the three 3's. I am so easily amused.
that was odd......
2966441 Yes! All hail Discordia!
i give u Discordia! and ascendancy.net/arashi/Ponies/63002%20-%204chan%20Discord%20Hubble%20Ponyville%20lulz%20macro%20meme%20meta%20moot.jpg
2967147 You win. I doubt I could top that.
Excuse me, just a technicality. How old are the Applebloom and sweetie bell in this? And are they having sex?
3159502 In the show, they've always looked to be in the 9-10 age range to me, so I tend to keep them at that age. Unless I write a story in which I age them up, they are not having sex with each other.
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But are the characters involved in sexual activities with anyone?
3160605 Only if they are of-age. I draw the line at foalcon and I don't intend to cross it. If you feel that I have crossed it, please let me know where so that I can do my best to correct it.
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No just making sure. Thanx for your patience.
3162055 No problem. I appreciate the input I get from you and other readers. I recognize that how I view a scene in my head isn't always going to coincide with how others view it and I don't want to inadvertently give offense.
Cadance is Princess of love and she love to beat that ass
i.imgur.com/CImTF.jpg
3167917 Love hurts (or something).
500 views.
yay
555 views.
666 views.
That...was...AMAZING!!!!
“I’m her mother,” she whispered.
Epic plot twist
Writing style + plot= a like from my reading account and from my writing account!
This must be rectified, ill tell my friends how great of a story this is and it is going into my favorites
5264052 Thanks. I really appreciate it.
Edit: And thanks for the favorite, as well.
I dont like gays in general, but the first two chapters made up for it. Still a great writing style though!
Not everyone is gay dude.
Wooooow, what a deceptive pervert!
This was awsome
5264243 Thank you.