Friendship binds the universe together, but how far can it go? Is there a limit to friendship? And if there is, can it be overcome? When Princess Luna is abducted, Twilight Sparkle must answer these questions as she struggles to rescue the princess and defeat the greatest threat in Equestria's history.
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2781372 You better believe it. I didn't come here to fart around. And even better, my fic's second chapter will be here soon.
2781430 Very well. I only really hesitate to do that because I don't like stuff to drag on. Plus I've been told I write too much, so I try to cut down on the word count. But if it helps to get into the feature box, I'll see what I can do.
2781458 Alright, I'll take a look.
By the way, what did you think of the story itself?
2781475 Well, that's good enough for me. Thank you. :)
2817551 Handsome? I guess, but he doesn't exactly get a lot of women. :P
Just read the first Chapter and I must say your Villain is quite good. You didn't milk the 'power' utter I've seen in a few of the Fanfics. The way you introduced him was very original, though I was expecting more of a Marilyn Manson performance first. He's definitely the Houdini of Ponies ^^
Among the grammar I only seemed to find one error which was (“Alright, alright,” Twilight acknowledged. Just give me a s-”) Where you're missing a quotation mark, but that's an easy fix
2836859 Yeah, I thought about having him sing first, but I like to be conservative with the word count, and I thought doing so would make the chapter drag on too long. The last thing I want is for a reader to tell me to get to the point. :P
So I didn't milk the power udder, you say? In what way?
Also, that is indeed an easy fix. Quite doable. XD
Thanks for posting your thoughts. I appreciate it. :)