Awesome chapter! simply amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter, please don't disappoint us.

Nice story, good plot. But your grammar and switching from past to present tense is infuriating, I recommend you get an editor/close friend to fix said errors. Your characters' personalities don't feel OOC to me, other than Applejack's country twang which I love reading you've captured their personalities quite well.

6082239 But it has humans in it. Why would you get rid of the human tag?

I wonder what their cats eat in Equestria.

Awwwwww no more chapters

Well the story is INCREDIBLE, there are only two danny phantom stories-that i have seen so far that have more than 20k words- that are good. Dont know if you are gonna continue it seen as the last update was on may? Yeah but oh well you have your life and your work. I will wake until the end of time if needed!

P.S. Eated three popcorn packs while reading an a pepsi.

P.S.S. This goes to fav!

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this story is awesome can't wait for more updates on the story

This is really good so far, please I hope you update soon.

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Where did you get this wall paper

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Dead?

Starlight Eyes widening as a twinkle lit it up. "...Clockwork."

Whet whet whet Starlight knows clockwork? okay now you really got my attention