I agree, no one is perfect. That is why people in the comments tell you the imperfections so you can go in and fix them. That way your story will be that much better.
The spelling of Ponyville is correct in the title of this chapter, however every other time you have written it the spelling was incorrect.
Press "control" and "f" on your keyboard to bring up the find bar. Type in what you want to find (which, in this case, is "ponyvil") and it will show you all of the places that you typed in those letters/symbols in that order. Then you can replace all of the incorrect spellings with the proper spellings.
Your spelling Pinkie Pie's name wrong :( oh and Rainbow Dash is a first and last name lol ............ Not critiquing just um if you wouldn't mind hehe
Very unique idea. The only thing is you need a beta to help catch grammatical issues. I would offer but I'm short on time lately and have another story I'm betaing.
Oh this is gonna be interesting. Very unique idea and also well written. Grammatical errors on character names but that's about it. Otherwise......AMAZING! Can't wait for Danny to get his powers back!
4520247 Yeah... I'm not sure if the guy is still active. His account shows he's been offline for over 50 weeks now, and, after having checked this story on fanfiction, which does have a few more chapters there, he has not been active there either for a long time. I don't know, I don't think this story is alive anymore. Which is a shame, really. Still, there are more Danny Phantom fics to be found in the attached folders, should you be interested.
Downvoted because I've seen too many good stories go to waste due to bad grammar and spelling. Will be changed when this is fixed.
Grammar and spelling always makes a huge difference: Let's go eat Grandma! ('Cause we're all cannibals!) vs Let's go eat, Grandma! (Your homemade chilli is always tasty!) And I want to be a gang raper when I grow up! (I'm going to rape all of them!) vs I want to be a gang rapper when I grow up! (We will make the best music ever!) And last, but not least Grammar: The difference between knowing your sht, and knowing you're(you are) sht.
5453618 Wow, you're alive. I hope you will continue this fic. I have noticed you've published a new chapter on fanfiction, , so I have good hopes. Also, I did notice your grammar is a 'bit' off. Although I am not much of an editor myself, I am more than willing to give some help, should you want it. Fixing names and such. Grammar isn't a strong suit of mine either, but I do believe I can help smooth out the overall experience. And I know my Danny Phantom stuff. I'm writing three fics myself on this site, so I could give some pointers here and there.
Just to clarify. I'm not an editor, but just a guy who likes Danny Phantom and wants to help you with this fic. PM me if you're interested. If not, that's fine too. But keep up the good work. This story is really interesting.
When are you going to update this story? I understand there are several more chapters on fanfiction, and I was wondering when they would make an appearance on this site as well.
The picture always gets me. Just look at pinky pay. (MWAHAHAHAHAH)
I agree, no one is perfect. That is why people in the comments tell you the imperfections so you can go in and fix them. That way your story will be that much better.
The spelling of Ponyville is correct in the title of this chapter, however every other time you have written it the spelling was incorrect.
Press "control" and "f" on your keyboard to bring up the find bar. Type in what you want to find (which, in this case, is "ponyvil") and it will show you all of the places that you typed in those letters/symbols in that order. Then you can replace all of the incorrect spellings with the proper spellings.
Can't wait for when they find out that they are ghosts. Pinkie, prepare the giggles!
Your spelling Pinkie Pie's name wrong :(
oh and Rainbow Dash is a first and last name lol
............ Not critiquing just um if you wouldn't mind hehe
Very unique idea. The only thing is you need a beta to help catch grammatical issues. I would offer but I'm short on time lately and have another story I'm betaing.
"Pinkiepie" - Pinkie Pie,
"Rainbowdash" - Rainbow Dash,
"Alpplejack" - Applejack
"barley" - barely
"Ponyvill" - Ponyville
Oh this is gonna be interesting. Very unique idea and also well written. Grammatical errors on character names but that's about it. Otherwise......AMAZING! Can't wait for Danny to get his powers back!
Hay how come this is less then the Fanfiction version danny already got his powers back there
This is still epic though and more proof that any thing with Danny is awesome
I realy hope this fic isn't lost because it is best danny phantom
fic I ever see ! So please CONTINUE !
This is one of the best crossover of DP and MLP ever.. Your story is amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter and keep up the good work.
4520247 Yeah... I'm not sure if the guy is still active. His account shows he's been offline for over 50 weeks now, and, after having checked this story on fanfiction, which does have a few more chapters there, he has not been active there either for a long time. I don't know, I don't think this story is alive anymore. Which is a shame, really. Still, there are more Danny Phantom fics to be found in the attached folders, should you be interested.
4527167 Thank you so much for the help and I did found an interesting crossover of DP and MLP it's called Guilt Of A Phantom.
4527330 Really. Who wrote it?
4527335 oh I'm such a blonde lol you created it.
First of all, its spelled Ponyville, not Ponyvill
Second of all, could you maybe put a link to the Fanfiction one?
Downvoted because I've seen too many good stories go to waste due to bad grammar and spelling. Will be changed when this is fixed.
Grammar and spelling always makes a huge difference:
Let's go eat Grandma! ('Cause we're all cannibals!) vs
Let's go eat, Grandma! (Your homemade chilli is always tasty!)
And
I want to be a gang raper when I grow up! (I'm going to rape all of them!) vs
I want to be a gang rapper when I grow up! (We will make the best music ever!)
And last, but not least
Grammar: The difference between knowing your sht, and knowing you're(you are) sht.
That is all.
I'm a girl.
5453618 Wow, you're alive. I hope you will continue this fic. I have noticed you've published a new chapter on fanfiction, , so I have good hopes. Also, I did notice your grammar is a 'bit' off. Although I am not much of an editor myself, I am more than willing to give some help, should you want it. Fixing names and such. Grammar isn't a strong suit of mine either, but I do believe I can help smooth out the overall experience. And I know my Danny Phantom stuff. I'm writing three fics myself on this site, so I could give some pointers here and there.
Just to clarify. I'm not an editor, but just a guy who likes Danny Phantom and wants to help you with this fic. PM me if you're interested. If not, that's fine too. But keep up the good work. This story is really interesting.
Hello. I have a question.
When are you going to update this story? I understand there are several more chapters on fanfiction, and I was wondering when they would make an appearance on this site as well.
It's private, not privet...
Oh my gosh, Dan is gonna try to kill everybody in the pony world!