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Apple bloom found out her cousin Babs Seed met her dimise in a huge train crash. Not willing to give up hope the sad earth filly built a robot, however it goes south once the robot feels it has one perpose and one perpose only to kill it's creator. Apple bloom is never going to be the same again that is if she is still breathing after this.
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Is this a troll fic?
2590948 No I'm being honest it will don't worry your mane about it.
Have you heard of Matrix cause you can become a part of a group Iike your avatar. the group is called Matrix.
This isn't a bad premise or anything, but the characters do seem to lack any real emotion. I know it's supposed to be dark, but I would have expected AJ learning about Babs' death to sound less like an instant-message conversation. Try throwing in some lines about how they feel and it should flow way better.
2591381 I am sorry again this is my first Dark fanfic.
Babs dies. Insta thumbs down.
No wonder you cancelled this story
2590948 Hey you should check out my groups sometime.
Solid idea i'd ask if I could use this premise since the story was cancelled. It would prove a great story in the right hooves, no offense.
I've done robots before.
2847742 Oh I'd be honored 13.
2848263 Well thanks for the permit. I'll be sure to keep you in the loop.
You think I could join that group of yours? 
2848562 Which one?
2848566 This one.
2848573 Sure, I guess,
2848579 I may have been here for almost a year but I got a lot to learn.
2848590 Yes I am allowing it, go ahead join in.
2848591 thanks