A Night with Lyra

Lyra at her computer and just relaxing on a Friday night, while browsing the internet and conversing with friends. She ends up thinking on her life so far and how bad it is.

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DetectivePingles

DetectivePingles #1 · May 11th, 2013 · · ·

That was a good read. I found myself identifying heavily with Lyra, and agreeing with almost all of the opinions she voiced. Also, you had an engaging writing style and little to no errors. 7/10.

iCeTeRiX

iCeTeRiX #2 · May 11th, 2013 · · ·

I can actually relate to how Lyra's nights roll

Great read

pahnazd

pahnazd #3 · May 11th, 2013 · · ·

I think many of us can relate to days/evenings like these.
We have many things, but at the same time there's nothing to do. So much laziness!
Have to agree with many points you have raised here as well, it's so true that it's scary.

Overall, good short little thing

LoGoDuDe14

LoGoDuDe14 #4 · May 11th, 2013 · · ·

I love how you took a nice little jab to fimfiction's current debacle, but all in all I really liked this story a nice little slice of life here

Zaki

Zaki #5 · May 11th, 2013 · · ·

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Thanks! This actually was just a recreation of my typical Friday night but with ponies.

Tima Scribbles

Tima Scribbles #6 · May 11th, 2013 · · ·

I enjoyed this a lot. I've spent far too many nights, staring at a screen in the dark, like Lyra.
It might sound sappy, but if you believe in yourself and surround yourself with supportive people then things can always get better.

Zaki

Zaki #7 · May 11th, 2013 · · ·

2561913 I don't think its sappy. I think the same thing.

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Zaki

Zaki #10 · May 11th, 2013 · · ·

2561485 Heh, the woes of the Internet wanderer perhaps? Still, glad you liked it.

2561096 I actually didn't expect people to like this. It was more of just something I felt I had to do for myself. Not really inspiring but I appreciate the kind words!

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