• Member Since 27th Apr, 2013
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AppleJared


Future USMC Officer.

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Good, good story, but one thing. (I only did a quick run through, so I don't know about any misspelling, mispunctuation, etc.)

Your paragraphs have no space in between them, yes I know Google Docs mess them up. It happened since I first came into FiMFiction. Just run though and check if you need to put spaces next time.

Yeah I went and put all the spaces in, but I forgot to publish the changes.:ajbemused:
Thanks for the heads up.

CDFA #3 · Apr 27th, 2013 · · 1 ·

"Sorry sugarcube, ah don't know how ta read."

after reading the letter AJ goes to find her but instead she finds her body and screams in horror after seeing the death she didn't mean to cause. Wow applejack i knew you were perfect i never thought you would be the reason someone commits suicide.:fluttercry:

2491287 I laughed hysterically when I read that.
Like, louder than I should have. :rainbowlaugh:

Wait, AJ wrote the letter that drove Tart to - .... Oh God. D:

2495033 No, Tart wrote the whole thing. AJ didn't write anything here.
The person who wrote the hate mail to Tart is undisclosed. Just your everyday hater.

2495507
I think along the lines of Eminem. I would find that motherfucker and shove his head up his asshole.

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