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Jan
7th
2017

cleverpun's Concise Critiques #7 · 10:38pm Jan 7th, 2017

Unfortunately, not every critique can fill up a thousand word blog post. Here is a selection of reviews/critiques, in two sentences each.

"Applejack, Are We Poor?" by InsertAuthorHere:

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Mar
11th
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #41 — In the Moon’s Platinum Glow · 8:08am Mar 11th, 2020

Jan
24th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #17 — Persephone · 3:37am Jan 24th, 2016

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I now take review requests. Check this blog for current status of requests, and guidelines to make your own!


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Jan
12th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #15 — The Writing on the Wall · 9:43pm Jan 12th, 2016

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Today's story relies heavily on its twist/reveal. I have made as much effort as possible to not spoil said reveal, but this is a difficult story to critique while avoiding spoilers.


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Dec
11th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #14 — There is no Luna · 12:16am Dec 11th, 2015

Mar
28th
2021

OPWA: Episode Eighteen · 5:53pm Mar 28th, 2021

Overpriced Writing Advice
Where you can learn the stuff I paid thousands of dollars to have taught to me, for free.

The Joys and Perils of Giving Free Feedback: Tips For The Put Upon Writer

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Aug
19th
2019

Being a Better Writer’s Summer of Cliche Writing Advice: Read a Book · 9:17pm Aug 19th, 2019

You know the drill! Achieve 88.8 miles per hour!
And don't forget, new chapter of Hunter/Hunted tomorrow!

Welcome readers, to another installment of Being a Better Writer’s Summer of Cliche Writing Advice! We are rolling right along and into week six of this feature, and the cliche advice just keeps coming.

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Jul
10th
2021

OPWA: Episode Twenty · 10:27am Jul 10th, 2021

Overpriced Writing Advice
Where you can learn the stuff I paid thousands of dollars to have taught to me, for free.

The Art of Mystery
(AKA "HOLY COW, WE HIT 20 EPISODES?!")

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Apr
16th
2017

Friendship is Card Games: Celestial Advice and All Bottled Up · 11:17am Apr 16th, 2017

So. When last we left Equestria, Thorax went from psychological aberration to glorious faerie moose, lord of the Crayola bughorses. Starlight Glimmer… Well, let’s be frank, she’s still a work in progress. Still, she found the confidence to lead her personal Suicide Squad on a combination coup/rescue mission, saving the main characters, the local pantheon of surprisingly kidnappable demigods, and Shining Armor.

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Jul
20th
2020

Being a Better Writer: Being Your Own Worst Critic · 11:52pm Jul 20th, 2020

Feb
20th
2016

Bradel Bookwork – A Character and Comedy Case Study · 12:43am Feb 20th, 2016

Hello my readers perspicacious and pulchritudinous![1]

Let's just assume that I've made the requisite announcements[2] and disclaimers[3], shall we? Then we can continue.

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Mar
31st
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner: Description/Title Reviews #3 · 9:42am Mar 31st, 2016

The description and title are some of the most important parts of a story. They provide readers with their first impression, convince them to read it, and characterize your story even after it is finished.

Today, we look at a set of stories, based solely on their descriptions, titles, and other relevant paratext.

The Alicorn Curse by chillbook1
http://i.imgur.com/BAtZIgd.png

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Apr
2nd
2016

Ways to make your library more manageable: Probably contains spelling errors edition (It does) · 2:58pm Apr 2nd, 2016

Ways to make your library more manageable:

1) Sort stories properly by making multiple bookshelves: tracking, read it later, favorites/read, stories I didn't like. This is a good way to keep track of everything *and* if you're too busy to comment on a story or review them, brief titles and descriptions can serve as the more opninon based feedback some writers crave.

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May
10th
2016

OPWA: Episode Six · 6:37pm May 10th, 2016

Overpriced Writing Advice
Where you can learn the stuff I paid thousands of dollars to have taught to me, for free.

Story Structure
(Or "7 Easy Story Points To Build Your Plot With")

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Jun
21st
2016

OPWA: Episode Nine · 6:47pm Jun 21st, 2016

Overpriced Writing Advice
Where you can learn the stuff I paid thousands of dollars to have taught to me, for free.

World Building
(Or "The 5 Category Method to Setting Research")

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Jan
10th
2014

Showing versus Telling - Emotion and body language · 2:19am Jan 10th, 2014

Feb
28th
2018

Writing 101: The Logistics of Large Casts/Conversations in Prose · 5:07am Feb 28th, 2018

In the past, I’ve advocated learning from cinema, trying to use and translate the same techniques into prose. I use terms like “blocking” and “off-screen” to refer to things in prose.

Today, however, I’d like to discuss one of the major differences between visual media and prose. It also happens to be one of prose fiction's greatest weaknesses: scenes and stories with a large number of characters.

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Jan
25th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #18 — Bitter-Sweetie · 7:41am Jan 25th, 2016

Jun
6th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #27 — Palimpsest · 11:17pm Jun 6th, 2016

Jan
21st
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #16 — So You've Just Slept With Your Best Friend · 12:42am Jan 21st, 2016

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