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Apr
11th
2016

First Impression Reviews: Episode One · 8:45pm Apr 11th, 2016

Below are two fanfic reviews based purely on the initial impressions provided by the first chapter (or first 3k words.) For an outline of what my reviewing guidelines are, go here. Please do not request reviews!



Progress by Andrew Joshua Talon
Rating: Everyone

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Apr
24th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #25 — Dash Academy (Webcomic) · 5:20am Apr 24th, 2016

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At the time of this review, the story is on the final chapter, but not complete.


Title: Dash Academy (also hosted on the user’s deviantart page)

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Jul
19th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #3 — Lies to Foals · 12:37am Jul 19th, 2015

Jan
28th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #20 — The Savage Way · 10:20am Jan 28th, 2016

Jan
7th
2017

cleverpun's Concise Critiques #7 · 10:38pm Jan 7th, 2017

Unfortunately, not every critique can fill up a thousand word blog post. Here is a selection of reviews/critiques, in two sentences each.

"Applejack, Are We Poor?" by InsertAuthorHere:

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Mar
11th
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #41 — In the Moon’s Platinum Glow · 8:08am Mar 11th, 2020

Jan
24th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #17 — Persephone · 3:37am Jan 24th, 2016

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I now take review requests. Check this blog for current status of requests, and guidelines to make your own!


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Jan
12th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #15 — The Writing on the Wall · 9:43pm Jan 12th, 2016

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Today's story relies heavily on its twist/reveal. I have made as much effort as possible to not spoil said reveal, but this is a difficult story to critique while avoiding spoilers.


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Dec
11th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #14 — There is no Luna · 12:16am Dec 11th, 2015

May
20th
2022

RE: The Doom That Comes To Canterlot · 3:06pm May 20th, 2022

As with a lot of artists on this site and many others, the end of MLP:FiM led to a reduction in my enthusiasm for this fandom and its content, which is strange to consider, since I stopped watching the show around season 6 or 7 and have no desire to follow the newest series. That isn't to say I don't still deeply appreciate MLP content, but I find that it takes a much stronger personal connection to elicit a desire to engage with it these days, whether that's for purposes of humor, visual art

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Mar
6th
2018

My Top Five Films (Or, at Least, Films I Saw) of 2017, Plus Bonus Content For Our Followers · 2:07am Mar 6th, 2018

Yes, yes. Welcome, one and all! It's me, back and happy to give you lot another blog post to gaze upon. And if you appreciate blogs of immense length, you're in luck.

As you may have seen from the title, this is my list for my top-viewed/only-viewed films of the year Twenty-Seventeen. An overall bad year, in my earnest opinion, but that's why we have explosives to play with. Hur, hur, hurrr...

Let's dig in, shall we?


Six

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Oct
12th
2018

A summary and a gate to the critique of Fallout: Equestria · 12:01pm Oct 12th, 2018

As the title of this article indicates, I will try to summarize here the main arguments of the long review of Fallout: Equestria that I wrote and that you will find in a link in this article. This summary is not meant to elaborate in detail on the different aspects mentioned in the critique but simply to provide an overview so that people who do not have the time to read the critique in its entirety can have access to my thoughts.

So let's start.

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May
11th
2017

Programs That Help Your Computer Run Great · 1:15pm May 11th, 2017

I thought I would share some programs I personally use on my computer that help to defend it from malicious attacks as well as run faster and smoother. The best things about all of these programs are, not only do they work incredibly well, but they are also one hundred percent free. They each do have 'premium' versions you can buy, but honestly thee free versions work great on their own. There is no reason to 'upgrade' unless you just absolutely want to (for whatever reason).

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Jan
28th
2016

The New Baby Child · 10:32pm Jan 28th, 2016

Apr
13th
2016

First Impression Reviews: Episode Three · 7:18pm Apr 13th, 2016

Below are two fanfic reviews based purely on the initial impressions provided by the first chapter (or first 3k words.) For an outline of what my reviewing guidelines are, go here. Please do not request reviews!

Before I get into the reviews proper, I just want to note: The way I’m doing these is not random--I’m clicking on the last page of my to-read list, and reviewing the stories on the bottom of each page...

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Jun
23rd
2016

So I Had This Weird Dream · 1:53am Jun 23rd, 2016

So I had this weird dream last night. It actually woke me up, but not necessarily because it was weird or frightening, but because I was compelled to write it down. Yes, even my dreams present themselves as stories: my muse has always been pushy.

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Aug
30th
2018

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner Not-Fanfiction Edition — Magic: The Gathering's Unbowed, Part 1 · 5:38am Aug 30th, 2018

Yes, you read that right. Today I'm taking a break from talking about fanfiction and magic equines. Today, I'm talking about corporate fiction and magic humans! I know it will be a transition for all of us, but there's more equivalency in writing quality than you might expect.

Today I'm talking about Unbowed, Part 1.

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Mar
30th
2017

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #32 — La Da Dee (PMV) · 7:35am Mar 30th, 2017

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I have reviewed some things that don’t traditionally receive deep criticism. I’ve done full length reviews of porn and a webcomic, for instance. Today, we add a Pony Music Video (PMV) to that list.

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Apr
8th
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #43 — The Heart Beats Still · 5:40am Apr 8th, 2020

I’m continuing my critiques of the entrants into the Imposing Sovereigns II contest. We continue down my list of “finalists”: stories which I considered awarding points to. I would like to stress, however, that I only ranked them because FanOfMostEverything made me; they are all excellent.

I must also point out, I never read the comic involving Princess Amore.

Title: The Heart Beats Still

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Apr
29th
2016

First Impression Reviews: Episode Ten · 9:16pm Apr 29th, 2016

It's back!

Below are two fanfic reviews based purely on the initial impressions provided by the first chapter (or first 3k words.) For an outline of what my reviewing guidelines are, go here. Please do not request reviews!

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