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Jan
10th
2018

TELENOVELA AU · 7:58pm Jan 10th, 2018

i was telling friends on a discord server about a telenovela AU bc i'm mexican so ofc id do a telenovela au so i thought I would share it here because it's dramatic as all hell and therefore amazing



Monochromatic-Today at 11:19 AM
yet
anyway going back to
Telenovela!AU

Novel, RariTwi Shrink-Today at 11:20 AM
blink
You're going to make me learn spanish to read your next story, aren't you?

Monochromatic-Today at 11:20 AM
Rarity's the heiress of a company, living her life away in her family's hacienda

Captain Croissandwich-Today at 11:20 AM
damn right she is
:V

Monochromatic-Today at 11:22 AM
shes engaged to be married with the rich heir of a company

Monochromatic-Today at 11:22 AM
Sangre Azul

Captain Croissandwich-Today at 11:22 AM
Heh

Arcshod, EL's Former Mom-Today at 11:22 AM
Oh boy

Monochromatic-Today at 11:23 AM
and all her life she's believed that she and Sangre Azul are meant to be

Gravekeeper-Today at 11:23 AM
I like where this is going

Captain Croissandwich-Today at 11:23 AM
Does she meet him at a, i don't know, gala perhaps?

Monochromatic-Today at 11:23 AM
perhaps
and yet
her entire life is turned upside down

you see
her father, when he was a strapping lad in his hacienda, was once attacked by bandits

Arcshod, EL's Former Mom-Today at 11:24 AM
Gasp

Gravekeeper-Today at 11:24 AM
Her father, Magno

Monochromatic-Today at 11:25 AM
and he was saved by the poor, lower-class librarian of the local town
who happened to
be
skilled
at
fighting
bc
DRAMA

Arcshod, EL's Former Mom-Today at 11:25 AM
El Magno

Monochromatic-Today at 11:25 AM
so El Magno was so grateful with Luz Nocturna
that they became fast friends despite the other snobs sneering at this lower class individual

and now
in present time
El Magno is sick
dying, nearly

and Rarity, also known as Rareza, stands to inherit a lot
Sangre Azul is pressuring the wedding

and Rarity, still in college, is torn

is her destiny truly to be in charge of her father's estate?
to be married to Sangre Azul and be nothing more than his trophy wife?
looking pretty sewing dresses?

NO

SHE HAS A DREAM
A DESTINY

but her father grows weaker with every day
her studies waver

and one day
Luz Nocturna visits his old friend
and brings with him

Her.

Rarity used to play with her as a child.
They were best friends once upon a very long time

Arcshod, EL's Former Mom-Today at 11:30 AM
:D
This is already my favourite raritwi AU, Mono

Monochromatic-Today at 11:30 AM
But now, the social divide was strong

Arcshod, EL's Former Mom-Today at 11:30 AM
I am in love with this.

Monochromatic-Today at 11:30 AM
Rarity grew into a young lady entrenched in her society that sneered at others
even though her father and mother were kind people who did not discriminate but... life
real life
has no place for kindness

Luz Nocturna walks in, and behind him, carrying a book with her, a sight so familiar it almost pains Rarity, steps in…

Penumbra Destello
or
Twilight Sparkle

they look at each other
two strangers that once held no secrets

"Señorita Bella," Twilight says.

Rarity, who sneers at so many others, cannot help but smile.
Affection still stands.

"Twilight," she says, "A pleasure to see you again."

And Twilight clutches her book, doesn't reply, doesn't smile
and turns to El Magno
greets him

and Rarity remembers
that day
Long, long ago
when rich little girls
told by their peers that she should not associate herself with someone as common as the daughter of the town's down-trotted library
sent away her best friend
and never spoke to her again

[ENTER DRAMATIC MUSIC]

LA PENUMBRA DEL AMOR

(Twilight of Love)

Gravekeeper-Today at 11:39 AM
As the theme music fades out, you hear Rarity's voice whisper, —¿Sabías...? Siempre amé el ocaso...

Gravekeeper-Today at 11:43 AM
What kind of plantation is El Magno running? Sugar?

Cursori, the Danish Noodle-Today at 11:43 AM
Sugar would be great because then Rarity would be a sweet heiress

Gravekeeper-Today at 11:44 AM
And Sweetie Belle would make a whole lotta sense. Dulzura Bella?

Monochromatic-Today at 11:44 AM
DULZURA BELLA

Additional:

Monochromatic-Today at 12:03 PM
I made a blogpost

Misago-Today at 12:06 PM
oooh
but
for the cliche to remain true
wouldnt it have to turn out eventually that rarity's husband-to-be is Twi's brother

Monochromatic-Today at 12:06 PM
Oh my GOD
I’ll figure it out


that is all

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Comments ( 34 )
Wanderer D
Moderator

This does remind me of the naca Rari/Twi thing...

I was grinning at first... though the reminder of your post about the class divide in Mexico came to mind at the end and toned down the silly grin to a still very enthused smile. Mono, I look forward to seeing this.

Well, that's just super. Now, I have this image of Night Light fending off bandits and it's both awesome and ridiculous because he's outmatched and looks around and realizes, "I need... liberchuks!" And then he grabs two dictionaries, links them with one of those silk ribbon bookmarks, and goes to town like he was Bruce Liber!

Ha! I spent 15 minutes on that one!

Majin Syeekoh
Moderator

I like where this is going already.

This would make a great story.

It'd make an even better audio drama. :twilightsmile:

Well I can now add this to the list of Rari/Twi AU's that I have instantly fallen in love with.

4770847
iM NOT ACTUALLY WRITING THIS

But yeah, romance between social class divide is a very popular topic in Mexican telenovelas, particularly because the divide is very present in actuality.

4770855
Aww, come on... *dramatic sigh* Fiiiine.

4770855
Why are you not writing this:pinkiegasp:? It's awesome!

...I'm going to get to read this, right?

the Belle family with a sugar plantation...

SUGAR BELLE WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE

I need this

120% WANT

Hm... given some of what you have said in the past I can see why you might not want to write this yourself. A shame as it could be interesting. Someone rather familiar with the culture would have to take up writing it though otherwise I think the telenovela feel would be a little flat.

Hap

If you write this, you must embed musical cues at the appropriate dramatic reveals.

This is high drama people! The big guns!

4770855

iM NOT ACTUALLY WRITING THIS

Mono I grew up with telenovelas this needs to happen. Terciopelo needs to be the mysterious maid in Rareza's house that is revealed at the very end of the fic to be Twilight's mother in disguise; she had to leave to save her daughter from the bandits that were after her. That's like the end-of-the-second-arc twist right there; Rarity finds this out, and her urge to tell Twilight is what brings them together after their start-of-arc-two fight.

Ayyyyyyyyy
no
debes escribir esto, por el bien de los amantes latinos de MLP en todas partes

I fully support this
Also, mono I didn’ t know you were Hispanic

4770994 I love that this has a specific layout for when they fight and make up.

I'd pay to see you and Mono collab and write this. Maybe get D involved too for extra hilarity.

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

EL MAGNO

Oh gods mono you're killing me :rainbowlaugh:

Mexican telenovelas are simply hilarious. A RariTwi AU based in them would be epic. Witch one? ALL OF THEM!! :pinkiecrazy:

This AU sounds pretty good, too.

I want to read this. Ideally with included Spanish wordplay for us Latin American people to enjoy a little more telenovela stuff. Or hear a radioplay... hmm........ I volunteer for male roles in either language thanksNot that it'll happen


Now I'm not saying you need to write this but hopefully someone else will take the concept and run with it.

I've been to that hacienda......



he wasnt wrong, though I first thought it was a resort

Sooooo, when are you publishing this?

Porque me recuerda a "Amor Real" y "Destilando amor"

4771587
un aaaaAAAAMOOOOOR REEEEEAAAAAL, SIIIIEMPRE TAN NAAAAAAATURAAAAAL, LLENO DE LIIIIIIBERTADDDDD

jajajajajaj

no miento medio me inspiré

Si, la hacienda y esa boda, debolada me acorde

Si no escribís una telenovela, al menos usá más el castellano, que para algo está!
Un sistema de mensajes secretos para hispanohablantes. (Y para quienes usen el traductor de google).

No tenía idea que eras Mexicana (¿Mejicana?). Saludos desde Chergentina




Seguí siendo genial, porfavor. Y escribiendo Rareza X Crepúsculo

Huh, didn't know you were from Mexico, neat.

And I would be so over this. And the more telenovela cliches in it, the better.
Y si lo llegas a hacer, por favor usa los nombres traducidos que se sacaron de la manga, estan geniales. XD

I know you said you aren't writing this and I know that you are busy with other amazing story ideas right now....

But just based on this comments section, this seems like a damn good idea.

I mean lets be honest here....telenovelas are AMAZING.

Whats funny is not only can I see this as a story....I can see this as a story about Twilight reading Rarity's 'novel.' Rarity seems like the type of Pony who would appreciate the drama and the twists as well as the over the top nature of Telenovelas.

Comment posted by Ketix Crawler deleted Jan 14th, 2018

4772698
YES YES YES YES YES YES
Rarity all projecting herself and Twilight into a telenovela, like a mix between A Novel Disaster and The Art of the Blade...
IM SO HYPED NOW GODDAMMIT MONO YOU NEED TO WRITE THIS PLEEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEEE

Can there be a sword fight?

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