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The whole getting kicked our of the house and being found by a evil doctor sounds exactly like grimreaper2594 story when slendernan left my in paradise You should check it out.
2565231 I looked at it and saw that it was very similar. Please know that anyone who reads this story, know that I never heard of this story. So forgive me if you think I stole it and shame on you for thinking that.
2567904 no problem and my bad
Really awsome story really hope that it gets updated
yeah no chapter.
This guy comes to Equestria because 'opps'
Dude. He is gonna get ALL dat flank action. Pony love left and right! I smell a..... "sniff" "sniff".... CAT FIGHT!
2759182 The reason Leo is here in Equestria is because Discord is looking for a deadly warrior, one with a heart of darkness. That's gonna be described in the next chapter.
I'm liking Leo's character
The only issue I see so far is that Leo said Rainbow Dash was his first kiss, when we learn in this chapter Anna kissed him. Maybe Leo should have said it was his first time kissing a pony.
2759644 He didn't want to bring up his past so he said it was his first kiss.
Omg you need an editor so bad I'm serious. The flow is good but god I almost flipped a bitch at some of those errors. If you continue to write this story (which I like) please let me or someone else edit it
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2769862 Working on it, kinda hard wearing a cast on your arm.
2774373 Ouch sorry to hear.
Suggestion that you can ignore or say fuck that to it have Anna show up in a later chapter. Aslo waiting for the next chapter is killing me
2888226 That's gonna be a problem, my Internet is bugged right now and I'm having trouble typing. Also I'm heading to New York to see my Uncle's wedding, I'll be back Monday and I will get it out as soon as possible. Sorry...
2891376understand all that I've had computer problems to and cool just impatiant adhd does that to me have fun up in New York
IT'S AAAALLLLLLIIIVVVVVEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorta?
Hooray updat and if the fedora guy is there could the girl Leo knew be there ?
drank they did and like aenergizer bunny they just kept going and going and going until yhey all fell out...
Damn it! Why do we always send the freaks to Equestria?
update?