A strange creature, similar to what a human but has been experimented on for nearly his whole life. He had been lost in his mind and his sanity breaking. A gate has shined and he is introduced to a new world, but with some strings attached...
2759182 The reason Leo is here in Equestria is because Discord is looking for a deadly warrior, one with a heart of darkness. That's gonna be described in the next chapter.
The only issue I see so far is that Leo said Rainbow Dash was his first kiss, when we learn in this chapter Anna kissed him. Maybe Leo should have said it was his first time kissing a pony.
2888226 That's gonna be a problem, my Internet is bugged right now and I'm having trouble typing. Also I'm heading to New York to see my Uncle's wedding, I'll be back Monday and I will get it out as soon as possible. Sorry...
This guy comes to Equestria because 'opps'
2759182 The reason Leo is here in Equestria is because Discord is looking for a deadly warrior, one with a heart of darkness. That's gonna be described in the next chapter.
The only issue I see so far is that Leo said Rainbow Dash was his first kiss, when we learn in this chapter Anna kissed him. Maybe Leo should have said it was his first time kissing a pony.
2759644 He didn't want to bring up his past so he said it was his first kiss.
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2769862 Working on it, kinda hard wearing a cast on your arm.
2774373 Ouch sorry to hear.
Suggestion that you can ignore or say fuck that to it have Anna show up in a later chapter. Aslo waiting for the next chapter is killing me
2888226 That's gonna be a problem, my Internet is bugged right now and I'm having trouble typing. Also I'm heading to New York to see my Uncle's wedding, I'll be back Monday and I will get it out as soon as possible. Sorry...
2891376understand all that I've had computer problems to and cool just impatiant adhd does that to me have fun up in New York