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Princess Celestia receives a letter from her student, Twilight Sparkle, who is slowly dying from horn cancer. Twilight Twilight Sparkle send Princess Celestia a letter, telling her she is dying. She also also sends along a final gift to Princess Luna. But something is different about the flower that grows from the gift........ Something is wrong with the gift that twilight sparkle sent to Princess Luna. It has not been seen in over a thousand years. How did Twilight Sparkle find it?


Now, the three princesses and the remaining mane six begin traveling so they can find thee new wielder of the element of magic, and a cure for horn cancer. Will they find it, or fail? The choice is yours....

Shining Armor will appear here and there. But not often enough for him to be tagged.



Credit for cover art goes to Amorebunny, who is not on fimfiction, but she is a real life friend of mine :)

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 40 )

We are intrigued by thy story. Thou need to slow down thy writing however, other than that We await thy next scrolls.

A good beginning, lets see where this goes.

tip: if you borrow someone's work you should provide a link to it.

Very sad... But I can still imagine twilight springing out of the bed and yelling LOL JOKES!!!!

2570396 i will be working on my next chapter for the rest of the week, when im not suffering fromm bouts of morning sickness

2570440 have some suprises up ma sleeve

2570576 i might do a story where she does that.

Two things: 1.detail! You need more detail but not enough to boar the reader
2. I feel that the first few chapters had been rushed.
Other than those, this is a good story

2571113 doesn't count, its not hyperlinked.

2571529 okay. im goin to try and find a way to hyper link it


2571276 any ideas that you think people will like?

You are clearly missing a step here.

1. Write
2. Edit
3. Post
4. ???
5. Profit

Step 2 is very important. Work on it. :facehoof:

Well, continue with the idea of the final flower, I'm intrigued to see where this goes.

257163 i have been pretty busy these past few eeks, because of Doctors appointments and many other things. i will work on editing over the weekend. thanks for telling me! :pinkiehappy: i like learning about things so i can fix them :twilightsheepish:

2571635 glad you like the idea

OMG this made me cry so much!:pinkiesad2::raritycry::fluttercry:

You do know there's a difference between the "Tragedy" and "Sad" tags, don't you? "Tragedy" stories don't start out sad, but become sad near the end, typically leading up to a downer ending. "Sad" stories do not have downer endings, and are thus almost always incompatible with "Tragedy". You can't fit the two together while still maintaining a sensible story. It just becomes an angst-fest that's unpleasant to read.

You can make a hyperlink like this

You do it like so:
[url=(...)](...)

Love it great first story and i know thi sounds silly but what's a collab

OMG this was so sad I cried so much OMG Celestia accually cried that must mean she no come back

2570576

OMG that would make my day and she should also be like YOLO if anyone says but y would u do that twi

2574546 dont worry, i have plans for tragedy tag

2575480 yes i meant that, and a collab is where two people work on a story together

2575052 awesome, thanks. this helps out alot :raritystarry:

2577284 That's actually what I was afraid of. When the two tags mix, the results aren't pretty. It becomes nothing more than a sob story that's there purely for the sake of being a sob story.

2579267 i just noticed that myself. i accidentaly put tragedy, and i meant human. (you will see what i mean later on in the story :trollestia:)

:pinkiehappy:I added a little to the second chapter!!!:pinkiehappy:

If you need help with filler content let me know and I can help you out

2610936 i was in abit of a hurry to post it. yes that would be nice if you could help with filler content

10:20 PM about to sleep cause of exams tomorrow checks email, sees mail saying fav story atm has new chapter, is really excited, gets to fim chapters not there, crys silently


(don't worry I still love UR story not blaming u)

2618702 im so sorry. i accidenttly published the chapter, when i was not finished with it. it is comng out sometime this week i promise you that

O that's ok then can't wait to read it

2620318 hehehe new chapter has been published

2647490 OMG must read

*continued*
That is so sad can't wait to see where this goes and am on high heels for next chapter

Great work and a big thumbs up

2651630 i will be working on this story, and another one soon. :twilightsmile:

2570440 beleive me, this is going to be a strange, but exciting story
I have finally started a chapter that involves the human tag

My condolance on your loss.

After reading this, I cried for more than an hour. This is the saddest story I've ever read

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