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Kingsley


Hello everyone! I usually write stories that have something to do with blood and gore associated so that's mainly what you're going to get from me if you decide to read my stuff ^~^

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This story is a sequel to A Wandering Soul


A few years have passed since Twilight and her friends were killed by Lilith's choices, and she herself has grown while being locked up. But Lilith, feeling regret and remorse has made a decision. Using her demonic powers, she feels the only way to undo what she has done is to give the Mane 6 back their lives. Lilith has no interest in looking for her "mother" anymore, and nor do the voices in her head control her any longer. This decision is hers, and hers alone.

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Comments ( 34 )

I did not expect a sequel to this.

3022802 So just an idea that came out of nowhere one day?

I find it hard to believe that the sequel to the extremely gory fic, A Wandering Soul, is tagged as Sad and 'everyone'. Nevertheless, I'm interested to see where this goes.
If this story isn't going to be gory at all. I suggest you change it to 'teen' at least. The tag, 'everyone', has no objectionable content and can be a canon episode of the show.
However, 'teen' has some slightly stronger stuff that wouldn't be allowed in an episode. This story mentions murder and death.

3022815 You raise some very valid points :twilightsmile:

3043267 Why thank you! :pinkiecrazy: btw <3 Doctor Who

3043593 Just wondering, when are you gonna update this again? :unsuresweetie:

3067126 Hmm... I give you my word that I will try to get the next chapter out by Wednesday night :pinkiecrazy:

Comment posted by CoatedHades436 deleted Aug 19th, 2013
Comment posted by CoatedHades436 deleted Aug 19th, 2013

A bit short, no? :pinkiesad2: I noticed a few punctuation errors here and there but nuthin serious.

"Ugh... this feels much more painful... performing it a second time..." Lilith said with pain in her voice.
The sound of bones shattering in her body deeply worried Pinkie and the Princess's. Blood started rushing down from her eyes and she started coughing up alarmingly large amounts of blood. Electricity emitted from Lilith's body as the ritual continued and her vision started to blur.

not sure if simply more difficult and hazardous doing it over and over again, or her urges have something to do with that....:rainbowderp:

3077231 Sorry for it being a little short, but yes :pinkiecrazy: tis good to think like that

LOL! RD still so hot headed.

3083654 Ironically it has been cold for a while and probably still is.

Yep. Called it. She lost control.:pinkiecrazy::rainbowderp::twilightoops: love how RD's just like, "ok, explanation, NOW, even though I just came back."

Also wasnt expecting such a fast update. Yay!:yay:

Why do I get the feeling that Lilith is going to die at the end of this , each resurrection giving them her own life as a price for the live she stole.

3264080 I will not spoil anything :rainbowwild:

:rainbowderp: You're back? I thought you were dead.

Lilith is so powerful that she resurrected the author and this story with him ! :yay:
If I am not mistaken , Cadence plan to sacrifice the "demon" soul for the ritual ... kind of risky but that's their only choice at this point.

Also , Mass Resurrection should work that way in WoW , it would be fun.

3842312 Yes I thought I was too :twilightblush: Sorry, I have been hiatus for a while because of work and stuff, but I always write a bit of my story when I get the chance in a notebook and I recently finished this chapter so I thought I should publish it immediately since it has been toooo long, I would never forget about my ponies! :pinkiecrazy:

3842371 Yes that is how powerful my baby is! :pinkiecrazy: But yes, I apologize for the obscenely long hiatus, but I will try my best to continue with this!

D'AW! THAT WAS SO MUCH FE-HHHHHHNNNNGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Goddamn. It's finally over. Now I'll have to reread it since I forgot what the hell happened the last 5 chapters. Ah well. Just glad the wait is over. For this anyways. Now we gotta wait for Pinkamena's Awakening 3, which I highly anticipate. Until next time, mates. :pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy:

NO! NO!
WHAT ABOUT THE BLOOD!?!?!? THE BLOOD!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!??
I! NEED! MORE! BLOOD!
NOT FEELS! TOO MANY FEELS!!! HHHNGGGGGGGEBHZE V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V V

Well this was something I had been waiting for for a long time. You did not disappoint and I like how you actually made it so that the urges were actually hers and that her inner demon just took over at those moments.

4679979 Sorry for another long wait :twilightsheepish: I didn't intend for it to take this long to complete. I'm glad that you liked the ending too btw :twilightsmile:


4664957 I will try to get it out within the next few weeks :pinkiecrazy:

Nopony seems fussed about the fact the CMC are still dead...

"You killed a few castle guards... but that's basically it." Fluttershy said.

Good thing guards aren't real ponies with families etc, right Fluttershy?

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Ikr it was a good story but they are dead and not revive yet but I’m sure they were back to life in one of those Pinkamena’s story

Very good story. My only gripes are the spelling errors and the constant use of underscores. Those repeat over and over when using the voice option.

Wait, what about the Cutie Mark Crusaders are they going to be resurrected to? And what about Spike what happened to him??

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